2 ways to Freak Out

May 24, 2012
By nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
30 articles 19 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When you're dreaming with a broken heart
The waking up is the hardest part
You roll outta bed and down on your knees
And for a moment you can hardly breathe”
― John Mayer


[crying woman walks up to lady officer]
"my baby is missing!i have no clue to where she might be, Mrs.officer lady!plea-"
"calm down miss,I'll try to help you find your baby."
"my baby! i won't ever find poor Samantha!she mu-"
"miss, please calm down so that i can help you find your daughter.i wont be able to help you if you are so unstable like this."
"but my baby i need to find her.she's probably wandering lost and alone.confused at where she is.........looking for her mama!"
"MAM, I NEED YOU TO CALM DOWN IN AN ORDERLY FASHION AND IN A DECENT AMOUNT OF TIME!"
"BUT MY BABY!"
"mam, I'm sorry i have to do this but I'm going to have to tazer you so that you will calm down.once again, I'm sorry that i had to do this."
"BUT WAIT,WHAT ABOUT MY BABY?!?!?!!?!?!?"

ZAP![TAZER GOING OFF ON THE MOTHER]
"an hour later............"

{that was the bad way of reacting!sad isn't it? now here is the better, right way to react}
"Miss? officer? can you please help me find my baby i seem to have lost her at wallmart."
"yes mam"
"thank you for helping me."


The author's comments:
i wrote this for my health class a few years ago. i was in 6th grade, so don't judge my writing skills on this piece alone!

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Funne GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2014 at 8:58 am
Funne GOLD, Cleveland, Ohio
19 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I never ask a man what his business is, for it never interests me. What I ask him about are his thoughts and dreams."

-H.P Lovecraft

It depends on the situation

on Dec. 1 2013 at 2:45 pm
nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
30 articles 19 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When you're dreaming with a broken heart
The waking up is the hardest part
You roll outta bed and down on your knees
And for a moment you can hardly breathe”
― John Mayer

this was originally for my health class, and i wrote it 5 years ago...the assignment was to put on a skit illustrating the 'right' and 'wrong' ways to handle difficult situatioins. i had the script laying around in my room, and i thought "hey! why not post it on TeeenInk?" i wasn't trying to get it published...it just happened. i'm sorry that your friend hasn't gotten published yet. it's not my fault.

on Oct. 28 2013 at 9:49 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

Umm what? I'm a little confused by that. Is the purpose of it so show us people to react in a calm way? or was it just for fun? it was still funny though.

cinnamoncake said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 10:08 pm

Cool, but teenink worthy? My friends have been trying to get their writing on here forever, and yet this makes it on? It's good just not right for this.

-Cinnamon


on Jun. 4 2012 at 9:40 pm
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.
For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.
And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
-Audrey Hepburn

i love this! haha :)




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