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Tu auras, toi, des étoiles qui savent rire

June 12, 2015
By o_annasun BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
o_annasun BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
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Once upon a time, there was a girl who wanted to fly.

And they laughed. Oh, how they laughed at her until their sides ached and their lips cracked. They laughed until their laughs pierced her heart and tore at her soul.

"You're just a silly girl. You can't fly."

So off she went, in search of wings. Who were they to tell her who she was and what she could do? She'd show them. She'd show them all.

If only she could find wings.

She traveled on foot to the far reaches of the kingdom, eyes on the ground, heart in her hands, searching. Her eyes became bleary, her heart heavy and her feet heavier at every failure. She went to the birds in their gilded wooden cages, their tiny bodies framed by foliage and rooted in place, chirping laughs at her dirty soles. She went to the dragons, majestic in their silver-scaled beauty, putrid breath and fire lapping at her heels. She even went to the mermaids, their pointed teeth bared, fins teasing just above the water's surface. But each creature just scorned her ugly, human feet until she could do naught but sigh, hang her head, and trudge on.

She used forty-three facial muscles more often than she used seventeen, and permanent paths of salt lined her cheeks. Jeers rang in her ears until they seeped into her brain and took over there too, taunting and mocking her bare, bony shoulders.
She returned to her home, broken and defeated. The sneers followed her, flowed through the crack under the door and the thin sod walls. They sidled up against her skin and squeezed, squeezed the breath out of her until she was choking on slurs.

She ran into the forest that day, and didn't come back.

She ran until she found a clearing, and when she didn't, she ran some more. The branches tore at her face and the twigs pawed at her skirt. The birds and dragons and mermaids stared on in confusion at this girl who had once had fire in her eyes, whose eyes were now extinguished. They watched as her foot, her damned foot, caught on a tree root and sent her flying. They watched as she landed in a crumpled heap, and there she remained, screaming and sobbing until her throat and her soul gave out.

And the birds and dragons and mermaids, they all swear by what happened next, as much as birds and dragons and mermaids can swear. They watched as the girl's body crumbled into ash and dust, and the momma birds and papa dragons covered their babies' eyes (the merchildren just watched, morbid creatures, they) as the wind circled and lifted some of the ash up, down, around, as if she were dancing. Then, in one massive gust, the wind gathered all of the girl's dust in its huge fist and flung it up in the air. She clung to the sky, that girl, and she glimmered like a thousand stars.

In a village next to the forest, people stepped out of their huts and pointed at the glittering diamonds laughing down on their heads.

Their mutters of "beautiful" and "floating" and "magic" twisted up into the sky, and the stars only laughed harder.

Once upon a time, there was a girl who flew.


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired both by a quote from Le Petit Prince (The Little Prince) by Antoine de Saint-Exupery and a line in Struck By Lightning by Chris Colfer. The story is meant to inspire hope and an appreciation for the unconventional. This is for anyone who has ever felt unaccepted or unwanted. You are not alone.


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Beila BRONZE said...
on Jun. 24 2015 at 8:32 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

Wow. This is such a beautiful story. It reminds me of the feeling I have when I finish reading books like The Fault In Our Stars. Yes, horrible things happen in life. But yes, we can rise above, in this case quite literally. The language, descriptions, and simply elegant story line create a lovely jewel of a story. My only negative comment is for this sentence: "Her eyes became bleary, her heart heavy and her feet heavier at every failure." This sentence falls from the strength of the rest of your writing because you repeat the "heavy" idea. A third unique adjective there would just make this story flawless. :) It is beautiful and touching; I'm glad I found it.

on Jun. 23 2015 at 7:26 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

I have goosebumps- Loved the quick flow, your overall language, and the ending.