mary anns adventure

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It was dark outside.
Mary Ann woke up to the sound of her little puppy.
She got out of bed and went into the living room.
Puppy was lying on her side. That was unusual.
She never lied on her side.
Mary Anne went into her parent’s room and asked them to follow her.
She showed them and asked if puppy was sick (Puppy’s name is Zena.)
They called the doctor and he came. The next morning the doctor said Zena had hypothermia here is a list of the things they needed to make Zena well again,
1.
5 golden flowers of termania,
2.
20 vials of spyder venom,
3.
And 10 roots of toopia witch can only be found on a dangerous volcano.
So the next morning Mary Anne set off first to find the 5 flowers of termania first in the forbidden forest.
She walked for hours without any sight of the flowers.
When she started making her bed she spotted something gold.
As she walked over to it she realized that it was a golden flower of termania.
She picked it and saw some spiders and she killed them all.
After she killed them she gained 20 vials of spyder venom.

That part of the quest was complete.
As she continued her journey she found a gigantic cave.
She went into it and saw a golden flower of termania.
But surrounding it was 20 spyders and one of them was the mama spyder.
She battled them and won.
She got the flower and also gained 50 more vials of spyder venom.
Then she decided to sleep there for the night.
In the morning she went to get breakfast and when she got back she saw 3 shiny things she picked them up and saw it was 3 pieces of a broken sword and decided to keep them.
She thought it would prove useful if she could get it mended.
Then she resumed her journey.
On her way she saw on a log in a river 3 more golden flowers of termania.
She jumped on the wobbly log and got the flowers and jumped off.
That part of the journey was complete. Now was the hard part the 10 roots of toopia. As she was going to the volcano she saw a store. She decided to go into it and get him to fix the sword. She went in and as he was fixing the sword he asked her if he could have 20 vials of spyder venom. She gave him the venom and he asked her if when she was done with her journey she would accept some gifts. She said yes and went the rest of the way to the volcano and found 9 roots and found the last one as the volcano started to blow. She got safely away from it as the spot she was standing on got covered with lava. When her journey was done she went and got her gifts she went home. Overall the dog was okay and everyone wanted to be Mary Anns friend



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that_one_kid said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 10:01 pm
don't end things with "the end". Just one bad comment.
Otherwise, the story has potential, not bad at all, just give it some work! keep writing.
 
averagexauthor replied...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 2:57 pm
I agree and try not to right using so many fragments: it's alright when their intended fragments and have a purpose... other than that good job(;
 
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