the fairy

July 13, 2012
By , unknown, IA
It fluttered around me as i danced about the forest. Green light cast from the sun between the tree tops led me to no place in particular and i knew i was lost. But lost only in paradise as i follow the flawless fairy. Tall straight trees lumbered about my head, dainty flowers of every color and shape and size painted the other wise green forest floor. A sun beam, tiny ray of golden light streamed down in front of me. The dainty fairy flew to it and as i stepped into the beam, something changed. Thin silver confetti washed over me- Fairy dust. And i flew about the green enchanted forest with effortless motions and seamless amounts of dreams.

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EdenArielle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2012 at 9:54 am
This is an excellent little descriptive piece! I think it could just use a little fine tuning of some of the sentences and then it could be really great (i.e. tall, straight trees... and dainty flowers.) Sorry, I'm just a grammer stickler like that haha I love this story though, especially the last sentence!
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