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Picture is Coming Alive

Oh please, paint some color into my black and white world? I'm dying to know reality' s definition. I want to uncover life's precious treasures. I need to find out how to live this rare remarkable journey we call life. I want to jump into reality's experience. I plead to feel the rush of taking risks. I wish on taking chances that may lead me some where new every time. I must admit these things scary me just a bit though. So dear painter, before I run into life. Do your art piece (me) a favor? Use your handy dandy brush to draw over my lines of sorrow. Replace them with lines of happiness. Erase my errors, make them flawless. Undue my regrets , change it to lessons learned. Wipe off my tears and place a smile on my face. That is all I ask for master . So farewell my painter, this art work doesn't want to just sit on wall and watch life pass me by. It wants to live reality once and for all. So goodbye creator !

Sincerely, your art piece that doesn't want to belong on wall.



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Maria said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 10:52 pm:
I like how the pic matched your description..very creative!!
 
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DanielM said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 12:22 pm:
After reading this for a second time...i came to the realization that this was awesome. I liked your begginging for sentences it painted an accurate picture of how life is. Great Message. My only suggstion for you is to write more of these type of stories. Keep it UP FWIN!!!!!
 
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S-A-M-14-06-94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15, 2012 at 12:28 am:
el megnifico 
 
Dreamer7697 replied...
May 16, 2012 at 9:27 pm :
Gracias Gracias mi amigo :)
 
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Kiki said...
May 13, 2012 at 12:36 am:
I like it alot , I like it!
 
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DanielM. said...
May 11, 2012 at 5:01 pm:
That was magnificent. Very original...
 
Dreamer7697 replied...
May 11, 2012 at 6:23 pm :
Thank you FWIN:)
 
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Silver-winged said...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 10:30 pm:

Awesome!!!!

your poem is very orginal :)

 
Dreamer7697 replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 10:37 pm :
Thank you so much! :)
 
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C.K.Snow said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 6:16 pm:

This was very unique! I really enjoyed this piece. Definately on of my favourites.

Could you check out some of my work? Thanks!

 
Dreamer7697 replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 1:40 am :
Thank you so much!:) and I'll check out some your work!
 
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Haven_94 said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 9:07 am:
this was really cool
 
Dreamer7697 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 12:19 pm :

I'm glad you liked it! :D

 

 
haven_94 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 12:22 pm :
your welcome
 
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ChoirGirrl said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 7:16 am:
I really like it. :) I noticed some errors, but only grammatical or spelling. Overall, it's very creative and unique. Kudos to you. :D
 
Dreamer7697 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 12:22 pm :
Thank you so much! :D yeah I noticed the errors a little too late to change them but oh well. I'm glad you found it creative and unquie cause that's what I was going for! :)
 
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Skrone said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 10:43 pm:
It was a good poem, but there were a few spelling errors, undue shoud have been undo and I believe you meant "scare me" not "scary me" but overall good :D
 
Dreamer7697 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 12:18 pm :
haha yeah I noticed that little to late so I was like 'oh well' but thanks so much for taking the time to comment . I apreciate it  ! :)
 
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somerandomperson said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 10:41 pm:
I love this and how you compared life to a painting
 
Dreamer7697 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 12:15 pm :
Thank you! :)
 
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