beneath the sea part 1

March 21, 2012
By Frozenfromfeels1 PLATINUM, Cinncinati, Ohio
Frozenfromfeels1 PLATINUM, Cinncinati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
You've stolen me. And I've come to take meself back. - jack sparrow

deep beneath the ocean so deep that no mere human could swim that far and still live there was a kingdom ruled by the water queen Oceania the city was made of pearls and other gemstones that sparkled and shone in the water as glimpses of the sun would reach them but they thought it was only their gods who made the gems sparkle. they were always so peaceful down there not bothering anyone and nobody bothering them there was peace for hundreds of years, for hundreds of years they remained hidden from the people on the outside world until one day when one of the many mermaids got curious of the outside world and swam up to the surface to discover for she was the youngest and most curious mermaid her name is Terra and she is 100 which isn't very old because the mermaid people age differently they live to be very old but eventually they do die....

to be continued in beneath the sea part 2....

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well what do u think?

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5yearsatlol said...
on Oct. 10 2012 at 12:25 pm
Would make a good novel! It needs more punctuation though, most of the sentances are run on. Don't be discoureged though!


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