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Welcome back to Heaven. Did you enjoy your trip to Hell?
“I like the flames.” he gazed down, ”They burned with a purpose.”
“You are correct. But different purposes serve them as we do not see the same ones.”
”The flames spoke to me with such a passion." he kept talking as if Father had never spoke. "They called to me. Longed for me. No more shall I endure this misery. Perfection is not the answer for every question. I am going back to Earth. I will not return here.”
“Very well.” Father said while pacing across the room. He looked down on the world. “I always had hope in you. It is not a mistake, you leaving. I made you human for a reason. You can think unlike the others.”
“I know Father.”
“As you know, you cannot return here. Never again a part of this place.” He hesitated. “Leave now son. I shall be looking after you as if you were still here.”
“Very well Father. Farewell.”
“Farewell my son.”
He jumped and landed in a dream; floating once again high above the sky.




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qui133 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 11:45 am:
cool! neither am i, actualy. but its better when the author lets the reader decide, to some degree. :)
 
qui133 replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 11:46 am :
oops that was supposed to be a reply...he he. sorry :p
 
fignewton527 replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 10:16 pm :
It's all good!
 
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qui133 said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 1:52 pm:
rather surreal...i like it though. is the son in the story Jesus?
 
fignewton527 replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 5:14 pm :
In my mind, yes. But I wrote this sort of interpretive because I'm not very religious haha :P
 
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fignewton527 said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 2:05 pm:
My apologies for the &quotes in there :) Just a small typo I suppose
 
LoveOnHerArms replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 9:00 am :
Very creative and different!! :)
 
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