the staring hall and the laughing door: a short story

May 12, 2011
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It appears in my dreams every night. It is just there, at the end of a hallway. Its laughing at me. I’m there again right now. The walls were looking at me. Bright, multicolored eyes were staring at me from every direction. I tried to step on the ones that were on the floor. They only blinked, and continued staring at me. The door was still laughing. I was trying to get to it, but it only got further away. I ran faster, and it stopped. I heard voices over the laughing. “this is the path you have chosen, you may go on.” They continued saying that. I was able to get to the door, at last, and was greeted by an empty white room. I was being pulled in by hands that were blended in with the room. The door shut, and everything went black.

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epic_rage_mastah said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 2:34 pm
this is a prelude to a book ill be submitting to teen ink. it is about a guy, who is going insane, and he is wandering through this strange world before he dies. the key to him staying alive is hidden somewhere in the world, and he has to find it
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