moonlight walk

January 3, 2011
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i looked down at the lifeless body on the beach. the water washed against her pale white face, the cut on her face turned the water pink in the moonlight. i walked along the beach, and even though i was walking through the water, my feat did not get wet. my short black hair blew in the wind. the girl on the beach and i had a lot of things in commen, the first thing, was that we are both dead.





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SpecialKay said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 9:09 am
Thats very nice! I love the description in the first few senteces.
 
marzapan replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 2:52 pm
thx, im glad u liked it
 
varika said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 8:21 am

wow was not expecting that...

thats great 

 
marzapan replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 2:52 pm
well, thats a good thing, i think
 
varika replied...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 4:34 pm
oh yes its a good thing
 
marzapan replied...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 3:08 pm

well, im glad you read it, thx

 

 
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