Lady Unicorn

September 28, 2010
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When you see her you see beauty. Her ice cold blue eyes.Her body is like a garden. Though she looks human. She has flowers for earings. You see on her face a single horn underneath the is a small harp connecting them. She has red curly hair. With wings of a bird you have never seen before. She sees her kingdom whom she longs to live in. For she can't live there because of her unhuman like apperance. I wish I could her hear, speak to her and touch her to know she is real. For now she is in my imagation forever trying to be free, trying to escape to become real. She wants to meet people be a person and to feel real feelings. I wish I was as strong as her. She is Lady of the Unicorns for she is the ruler of them.

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Serendipity-Pen said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 9:19 pm

Wow, you have a lot of talent! My only critquie would be to put it into stanzas(if you don't know what those are, they're basically poetry's paragraphs!) Don't stop writing!!


Christamonkey replied...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 11:45 am

thank you soo much and i will take your advice


Uberhombre replied...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 12:22 am
I agree, it was great, just get it into stanzas and maybe tweak the punctuation to improve it.
Christamonkey replied...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 8:03 am
thank you also and i will remeber that :P
emjay33 replied...
Dec. 22, 2010 at 10:36 am
I agree with above comments :P and guess what? I found you :D
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