Lady Unicorn

September 28, 2010
By KhyrsteaBurnell GOLD, New Gloucster, Maine
KhyrsteaBurnell GOLD, New Gloucster, Maine
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When you see her you see beauty. Her ice cold blue eyes.Her body is like a garden. Though she looks human. She has flowers for earings. You see on her face a single horn underneath the is a small harp connecting them. She has red curly hair. With wings of a bird you have never seen before. She sees her kingdom whom she longs to live in. For she can't live there because of her unhuman like apperance. I wish I could her hear, speak to her and touch her to know she is real. For now she is in my imagation forever trying to be free, trying to escape to become real. She wants to meet people be a person and to feel real feelings. I wish I was as strong as her. She is Lady of the Unicorns for she is the ruler of them.



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emjay33 SILVER said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 10:36 am
emjay33 SILVER, Freeport, Maine
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I agree with above comments :P and guess what? I found you :D

on Oct. 4 2010 at 8:03 am
KhyrsteaBurnell GOLD, New Gloucster, Maine
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thank you also and i will remeber that :P

Uberhombre said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 12:22 am
Uberhombre, Durham, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who knows you and loves you just the same."
-Elbert Hubbard

I agree, it was great, just get it into stanzas and maybe tweak the punctuation to improve it.

on Sep. 30 2010 at 11:45 am
KhyrsteaBurnell GOLD, New Gloucster, Maine
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thank you soo much and i will take your advice

 


on Sep. 29 2010 at 9:19 pm
Serendipity_Pen GOLD, Shakopee, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way of finding the limits of the possible is by going beyond them into the impossible."
~ Arthur C. Clarke
"Better to remain silent and thought a fool then to speak and remove all doubt." ~Abraham Lincoln

Wow, you have a lot of talent! My only critquie would be to put it into stanzas(if you don't know what those are, they're basically poetry's paragraphs!) Don't stop writing!!

 



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