Unremembered Secrets - Chapter 2: Draven

September 15, 2010
By Ebonykitty SILVER, Naples, Florida
Ebonykitty SILVER, Naples, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You can't run out of dreams. Dreams are the start of everything...


I watched her during lunch, not paying attention to the conversation going on at my own table, but her, glancing over when she laughed at something Cam said or rolling her eyes at whatever stupid comment Britt made about how she was trying to lose weight.
“What’s up with you?”
“I’m not really sure,” I turned to Chaos.
“Why are you watching the new girl? Got a thing for her?” Chaos elbowed me playfully.
I rolled my eyes, “No, just something about her, I’m curious,”
“Like what?”
“I don’t know, like she doesn’t belong here,”
“Maybe because she belongs with us,” Chaos glanced at her.
“What do you mean?”
“Seriously, she looks like you, and she’s with ‘The Poplars’’,” she pointed out.
“Well then, I guess I’ll just have to pull her away from Cam,” I smiled at Chaos.
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The author's comments:
Chapter 2! Sorry it took so long :D

~ Ebony ~

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on Oct. 6 2010 at 5:01 pm
Dragonscribe BRONZE, West Lafayette, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"A Person's a Person no Matter how Small"
and
"A Rose by Any Other Name Would Smell as Sweet"
and
"God helps those who help themselves"

hmmm...i don't really like how this segment is constructed, but i read the parts before this, so i can say that this is a great story so far. i just don't like this part.

on Sep. 18 2010 at 5:22 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

Yayyy!!and you're welcome:D

on Sep. 18 2010 at 4:00 pm
Ebonykitty SILVER, Naples, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can't run out of dreams. Dreams are the start of everything...

Thanks, this is just a short chapter. Chapter 3 should be up soon, and it's longer :D

~Ebony~


on Sep. 18 2010 at 3:34 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

It sounds like the beginning of what could be a good story, but make it longer!!




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