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Unremembered Secrets - Chapter 2: Draven

I watched her during lunch, not paying attention to the conversation going on at my own table, but her, glancing over when she laughed at something Cam said or rolling her eyes at whatever stupid comment Britt made about how she was trying to lose weight.
“What’s up with you?”
“I’m not really sure,” I turned to Chaos.
“Why are you watching the new girl? Got a thing for her?” Chaos elbowed me playfully.
I rolled my eyes, “No, just something about her, I’m curious,”
“Like what?”
“I don’t know, like she doesn’t belong here,”
“Maybe because she belongs with us,” Chaos glanced at her.
“What do you mean?”
“Seriously, she looks like you, and she’s with ‘The Poplars’’,” she pointed out.
“Well then, I guess I’ll just have to pull her away from Cam,” I smiled at Chaos.
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Dragonscribe said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 5:01 pm:
hmmm...i don't really like how this segment is constructed, but i read the parts before this, so i can say that this is a great story so far. i just don't like this part.
 
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Macx14 said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 3:34 pm:
It sounds like the beginning of what could be a good story, but make it longer!!
 
Ebonykitty replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 4:00 pm :

Thanks, this is just a short chapter. Chapter 3 should be up soon, and it's longer :D

~Ebony~

 
Macx14 replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 5:22 pm :
Yayyy!!and you're welcome:D
 
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