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Beautiful Monster Chapter 1

Chapter 1



I sat in my seat. I'm diferent than everyone else. Like always I wasn't paying attention to what the teacher was saying and like always boys were starring at me, a few boys were trying to get my attention. Luckily no one knows my history.

My name is Nikki, Nicole Stone. My sister, Emma and I, were walking on a trail in the forest near our home.

Suddenly, a guy came out from a bush and attacked us. Then I blacked out.

I woke up to a burning throat.

Emma was still on the ground.

"Emma." I whispered.

My throat was starting to get worse.

I saw a deer just at the river next to us.

River? We were on the trail when that guy showed up.

My instincts took over and I attacked the deer.

I drunk it's blood. It tasted good. It's body went limp and I through it to the river.

I walked back to where Emma was.

Emma was standing up now.

"What happened?" She asked.

"I don't know." I said.

"Why does my throat burn?" She asked.

"You need blood." I said quietly.

"Blood? You mean like a vampire." She said.

I nodded.

I was year older than her.

I was 16 she was just about to turn 15 a few days later.

After that day, we never saw our parents and we have had to survive on blood. We were always together as sisters.

I came back to the world. I had dozed off.

The teacher was standing in front of me.

"Ms. Stone, Would you care to answer that last question?" She always does that to bother me.

Emma and I discovered a few powers.

We can read minds of any person we want.

I starred into her eyes until I felt my shield drop.

'She will never guess this one.' She thought. ' Having a lesson on mythical creatures is great. Especially on how they got rid of witches in old times.'

"They got rid of witches by burning them. The burning times." I answered.

She looked angry at her self.

I smiled.

She walked away.




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Sparkora said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:24 pm:
Good writing, but I think it's time to leave the vampire themes behind. Half the stories on this website are about vamps.
 
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LittleFlutiePie said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 11:25 am:
This is really good, but like Blue4 said, it can use some details. Otherwise, very nice, and the flashback sets a good tone. Keep it up :)
 
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AngelS said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 3:44 pm:
Check out my story "Angel". Thanks.
 
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Blue4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:11 pm:

Great, you have a way of telling a good story, a wonderful begining needs a great continuation...

My instincts took over and I attacked the deer.

"My instincts took over and I attacked the deer. I drunk it's blood. It tasted good. It's body went limp and I through it to the river" maybe a little more detail here: how did Nicole kill it, what did she feel, did the deer fight back? This is a good place to elaborate. Otherwise awesome! :)

By the way, can you read some of... (more »)

 
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Skyewolf77 said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 11:32 am:

this is realy good

 

 
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mudpuppy said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 1:54 pm:
I really like this and the title-perfect! I especially like the end!
 
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