black winged angel

June 30, 2010
By zisisz SILVER, Long Beach, California
zisisz SILVER, Long Beach, California
5 articles 4 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"a heart of stone, a smoking gun. i can give you life, i can take it away"-bloc party


hold me tight, as our nightmares come to life right before our eyes... an we pray that we will soon be awakended by the black winged angel of destruction...friends we soon lose, family we begin to forget...an love is something we never have heard of...in this dark abyss world of ours the brightest color is the also the darkest...we can never breathe with ease, or think a good thought...only thing that is familiar to us is the unfamiliar...to experience it for an eternity....not remembering who we were, are, or wanted to be....only thing we do know is to keep walking down the road of perishment and with all hope gone and no light existing...we still manage to hold on to eachother...the angels watching from behind the dead trees and broken dreams...they stare wondering why this view is some what familiar...for they were once on this road...the road to perish an being reborn as angels of the dark...thier kiss is the kiss of death... and yet im yearing for it...im holding on to my angel of dark destruction...an shes leading me to my silent, slow death....i watch as my nightmares come to life before my eyes...an i pray for my black winged angel to soon awaken me...


The author's comments:
i was inspired by this weird dream i had =]

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zisisz SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 11:33 am
zisisz SILVER, Long Beach, California
5 articles 4 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"a heart of stone, a smoking gun. i can give you life, i can take it away"-bloc party

hey guys thanks for the positive comments im really glad you guys like it and thanks also for the tips, advice and encouragement =]

on Jul. 22 2010 at 1:38 am
Great start, but it needs work Try to pay attention to punctuation too.

on Jul. 21 2010 at 11:23 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
2 articles 4 photos 75 comments
...wow that was awesome. good job!,(:

on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:15 am
i_am_nobody SILVER, Belgrade, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, don't take anyone's sh*t, and never let them take you alive." -Gerard Way

that was really good!




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