The Crow

April 22, 2010
Flying high above the crowd, my wings feel the gentle breeze. I'm soaring higher then all their pathetic attempts at civilization. Their little rock huts are slowly reaching higher. My jet black feathers are starting to fall off as the ice season approaches. I land on a tree next to a small animal-like human. His hair is a mess, his body covered in hair. As he approches I spot in his hand a small rope covered stick. A net! As i spread my wings i find myself trapped at his mercy. Three days have passed and I've been stuck in a cage constently being fed. It's not so bad until i pick up the faint smell of vegtables being boiled. Suddenly the cage I'm in is being carried. Towards the boiling water. As the door opens I try to fly but their's only one way out. Into the pot.

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RedTornado said...
May 9, 2010 at 10:18 pm
actually were all mad here
RedTornado said...
May 9, 2010 at 10:18 pm
yes it was but it can be used in modern times as well
Aelita said...
May 9, 2010 at 4:55 pm
Very interesting!  This story makes you think between the lines.  You managed to tell a profound story in a small space!  Was this intended to take place in the ice age?  Keep on writing!
jonas_chic899 said...
May 7, 2010 at 10:26 am
thats kinda scary, yeah i agree- kool perspective and great work!! that kept me reading:]
smilyteenpoet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 4, 2010 at 9:38 pm
it's a very interesting perspective. The writing fits the mood of the piece.
Aelita replied...
May 9, 2010 at 4:59 pm
I agree with smilyteenpoet and lime921, the new perspective is what adds depth.  And as for jonas chic899, I would also agree with you- in that the new perspective is what can make it a little scary.  It gives us as people something to think about!  At least.. I assume I'm talking to people... as opposed to rabbits!
lime921 said...
May 1, 2010 at 9:02 pm
interesting perspective with the crow's point of view
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