Angel Wings

April 9, 2010
By RedTornado GOLD, Frederic, Wisconsin
RedTornado GOLD, Frederic, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the rich wage war its the poor who die.


Standing on the rooftops looking down at the people. Their all like little ants down their. All thats going through my head is deprssion. All i can feel is emptiness. And all i can see is her when she's with him. The wind blows my silver hair back as i look down. It's time to choose whether to fly or fall. As i lean forward i can feel my wings spread free. I'm not falling I'm flying. Up to heaven were the hurt will go away forever



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on Apr. 23 2010 at 5:41 pm
RedTornado GOLD, Frederic, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the rich wage war its the poor who die.

thanks and sorry

on Apr. 23 2010 at 3:51 pm
Xxvampire_kittyxX, Porland, Oregon
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awwwwwwwwwww that makes me want to cry T-T sad face

on Apr. 20 2010 at 5:18 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

-Robert Frost

Wow! Love it! there are some minor grammar issues, but over all it's great. I can totally see where you're coming from. keep up the good work!

on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:33 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Lots of grammar issues, but good job overall! And yeah, there are grammar issues!

-Angel



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