Angel Wings

April 9, 2010
Standing on the rooftops looking down at the people. Their all like little ants down their. All thats going through my head is deprssion. All i can feel is emptiness. And all i can see is her when she's with him. The wind blows my silver hair back as i look down. It's time to choose whether to fly or fall. As i lean forward i can feel my wings spread free. I'm not falling I'm flying. Up to heaven were the hurt will go away forever

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citydancer94 said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 5:18 pm
Wow! Love it! there are some minor grammar issues, but over all it's great. I can totally see where you're coming from. keep up the good work!
Xxvampire_kittyxX replied...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 3:51 pm
awwwwwwwwwww that makes me want to cry T-T sad face
RedTornado replied...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 5:41 pm
thanks and sorry
SavingAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 9:33 am

Lots of grammar issues, but good job overall! And yeah, there are grammar issues!


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