Burnt prologue

February 27, 2010
By chaotic_stuff BRONZE, Lawrenceville, Georgia
chaotic_stuff BRONZE, Lawrenceville, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is fun,so don't waste it being normal.







-Me!!!!


CRACK!! Run dirty building dark alley adrenaline spike. Run. Run. Run. Gunshots. Closer. Bright crowds many cars dense pack of shoppers. Can't go through,need to go through. Catching up. move you stupid people!! Catching up. Thick black hair green eyes. Daniel. Too fast strong cruel. Jagged pain. Daniel. black boots ragged jeans simple t-shirt. All my fault, all my fault.
Hurry. Police coming up. evil blue caps, horrid batons i used to trust. leering grins hard cruel eyes. running turn left blocked run trip panic look back forward not safe screaming masses pressing in. Zigzag line of pain down chestblood runs down neck can't feel the pain heart is missing. Emotional patchwork of bromen pieces held together by one hope. 100 more steps.
soudlessly watch as bullet flies by.
Red drips down his chest don't die don't die.
Pound.
Pound.
Pound.
One foot over the other. Almost there. they catch me. it does't matter. I collapse. Screaming in pain. Wake up. Wake up. Black surrounds me, can't fight it anymore. Don't know how to help him. Wake up.
Wake.
Up.


The author's comments:
This piece is meant to be a confusing glimpse,it shows just a bit of what is happening, i'm going to come out with more.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 8 comments.


on Mar. 13 2010 at 4:53 pm
chaotic_stuff BRONZE, Lawrenceville, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is fun,so don't waste it being normal.







-Me!!!!

I love writing, and i write sometimes just to...write. I'm writing a full bok.I'm about to turn in more:)

on Mar. 13 2010 at 4:52 pm
chaotic_stuff BRONZE, Lawrenceville, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is fun,so don't waste it being normal.







-Me!!!!

To hook everyone on. I'm going to have more, it is really a book i'm writing. So, after i'v gone through and edited it, i turn it in:)

on Mar. 11 2010 at 7:48 pm
why did you want it to be confusing?

on Mar. 11 2010 at 7:47 pm
why did you write this? it sounds cool,

catlover09 said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:59 pm
It has a cool name.

on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:25 pm
chaotic_stuff BRONZE, Lawrenceville, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is fun,so don't waste it being normal.







-Me!!!!

Thank you:) it was meant to be confusing,there wil be much more to come....if my fingers dont drop off from exhaustation!!!!!!

on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:24 pm
Wow. that was interesting. he is a good writer.

Joe is Cool said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:20 pm
Hmm.....slightly confusing.....but very descriptive:)


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!