Burnt prologue

February 27, 2010
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CRACK!! Run dirty building dark alley adrenaline spike. Run. Run. Run. Gunshots. Closer. Bright crowds many cars dense pack of shoppers. Can't go through,need to go through. Catching up. move you stupid people!! Catching up. Thick black hair green eyes. Daniel. Too fast strong cruel. Jagged pain. Daniel. black boots ragged jeans simple t-shirt. All my fault, all my fault.
Hurry. Police coming up. evil blue caps, horrid batons i used to trust. leering grins hard cruel eyes. running turn left blocked run trip panic look back forward not safe screaming masses pressing in. Zigzag line of pain down chestblood runs down neck can't feel the pain heart is missing. Emotional patchwork of bromen pieces held together by one hope. 100 more steps.
soudlessly watch as bullet flies by.
Red drips down his chest don't die don't die.
One foot over the other. Almost there. they catch me. it does't matter. I collapse. Screaming in pain. Wake up. Wake up. Black surrounds me, can't fight it anymore. Don't know how to help him. Wake up.

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catlover09 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 5:59 pm
It has a cool name.
Twilightreader101 replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:47 pm
why did you write this? it sounds cool,
chaotic_stuff replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 4:53 pm
I love writing, and i write sometimes just to...write. I'm writing a full bok.I'm about to turn in more:)
Joe is Cool said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 5:20 pm
Hmm.....slightly confusing.....but very descriptive:)
Readingrox12563 replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 5:24 pm
Wow. that was interesting. he is a good writer.
chaotic_stuff replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 5:25 pm
Thank you:) it was meant to be confusing,there wil be much more to come....if my fingers dont drop off from exhaustation!!!!!!
Readingrox12563 replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:48 pm
why did you want it to be confusing?
chaotic_stuff replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 4:52 pm
To hook everyone on. I'm going to have more, it is really a book i'm writing. So, after i'v gone through and edited it, i turn it in:)
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