Chapter one: Defiance By Choice (Part four)

November 6, 2009
By Vixie_Chu SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
Vixie_Chu SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
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First,and for most you have wondered into restricted zones and stole artifacts. Second, you refused to take the pills designed for you to stay away from the dangerous field of love. Third, you’ve denied your assigned partners to fall in love! If you do this again you will be assigned to be executed. Is this understood?”
We both meekly nodded in a reply.
“Good.” With that the men, that was holding her, gave her a swift hit over the head. I wanted to scream at them and rip them limb from limb but they did the same to me causing me to be out like a light bulb.

The author's comments:
This is the third part of the first chapter of a novel I hope to complete soon. It is about the power of love, and how it isn't so easy to get rid of. Please tell me what you think...Like what you think is good, bad, or needs changing. Thank you.

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G. said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 12:28 pm
This is awesome. You really should go on. I want to read more. :D

You've got talenet. Good job.


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