Paranoid-or Not?

September 29, 2009
By WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea


Something is following me. Not a someone but something. I have felt it for several months now. Eyes following my every move. I feel them now. They are probably watching every word I am typing, but I don’t care. I need to tell someone. If I told anyone else they would think I was completely mental. I used to think it was a man, a weird stalker. Now I wish it was a man. I feel it. I swear I saw a shadow once. And I promise you it wasn’t a man’s shadow. It had wings. But they weren’t angel’s wings. They were black and purple with tattered holes. They were somehow very beautiful. They reminded me of something, I just don’t know what. Once I saw birds outside my window at midnight. Silhouetted against the full moon in the clear night sky. I told my mom, and she told me no birds flew so low at night and to go back to bed. I went but I never fell asleep that night. I watched the window. Once when staying home alone, I heard a loud thump from the back bedroom. I stiffened and decided to grab my cell and laptop. I never once walked into the hallway or any of the bedrooms. It took me days to finally get asleep in my own room again. I have gotten calls with mysterious words on them. A different language. One I don’t recognize. It’s deleted when I show others. I keep a journal of all my weird experiences. But one day I came home and it was gone. Later I found several pages of it pinned to my closet door, and some in my locker at school. Never had I dared to write about my experiences again- until the most recent one. I had a dream of a lady. A beautiful young lady carrying me in a blanket. I was an infant. She was muttering in some other language. The language in the messages. She looked down at me, tears in her eyes, and passed me to someone else. Then the dream ended. But not before I saw a little wing behind her back. A purple and black mysterious, beautiful wing. I decided it was a memory, but of what?



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on Dec. 4 2009 at 11:48 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Actually thats hilarious because the other story that I am writing and is keeping me so busy is a story written about guardian angels!

on Dec. 4 2009 at 11:47 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Thanks! You're the first one to understand why I use the short, not very vivid sentances. And sorry you guys! I am putting the sequel on a little postponment... bit busy lately. Sorry!

Natie SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2009 at 2:33 pm
Natie SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Struggle as hard as you can for whatever you believe in" -ahaha thats from a Fortune Cookie :D

Good!! Because im dying to read more!! I love it, even though they say more details, i sorta disagree because your short sentences give it a sort of mysterious feel to it. But details wouldn't hurt:) i was hooked and now i want more!!

on Nov. 29 2009 at 11:16 am
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

I am proud to say that I am working on the sequel as we speak. I will post as soon as possible!

craftychick said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 8:50 pm
craftychick, Springfield, Illinois
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I think it would be neat if you made the thing with wings your guardian angel. That is why it seemed like a memory. Do you like it?

on Nov. 8 2009 at 4:34 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Well I would love to as soon as I finish my NaNoWriMo story, any request for the ending???

craftychick said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 3:15 pm
craftychick, Springfield, Illinois
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Can you complete the story? I'm dying to know how it ends!

on Oct. 27 2009 at 8:47 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Nooo thank YOU!

on Oct. 22 2009 at 9:29 pm
ArtemisOwlfeather SILVER, South Pasadena, California
5 articles 1 photo 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am evil. I am evil. I am evil. I do not bounce. I am evil."

Thank you!

on Oct. 22 2009 at 8:47 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Yeah that wasnt my plan but I have been told by many on here and my friends that it would be amazing to make a sequal

on Oct. 22 2009 at 8:44 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Yeah sure, I would love to see it in a 3D version

on Oct. 22 2009 at 2:48 pm
ArtemisOwlfeather SILVER, South Pasadena, California
5 articles 1 photo 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am evil. I am evil. I am evil. I do not bounce. I am evil."

May I please turn this into a sculpture? You will get credit.

larawayt said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 9:55 pm
I liked this story. When you were describing the figure you said, “I feel it. I swear I saw a shadow once. And I promise you it wasn’t a man’s shadow. It had wings. But they weren’t angel’s wings. They were black and purple with tattered holes.” I got a picture in my mind. This made the story interesting. I wondered where this winged creature came from. You put a nice twist to the end of he story when you said, “I decided it was a memory, but of what?” You could make a sequel to this story.

on Oct. 13 2009 at 4:33 pm
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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like they said. DETAILS. i liked the wings thought. and the biginning was superly awesome

on Oct. 12 2009 at 1:39 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

this is great! I loved it

on Oct. 11 2009 at 9:18 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you're alive, it isn't.”
"Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw."
"Words and hea

Thanks you guys! And normally most of my stories dont have lots of description, I need to work on that.

KatrinaC47 said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 3:33 pm
KatrinaC47, Loma Rica, California
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That was really good! The only critique I have for you is that a LITTLE more description would be nice. You can never have to much description!:)

on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:44 pm
a_bunch_of_nuns, Unknown, Wisconsin
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It gave me shivers, it did!

This could be a start to a really great story... I like it!!!

on Oct. 9 2009 at 8:35 am
Onceknown BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage is doing what your afraid to do
There can be no courage unless your scared
-Eddie Rickerbacker

Cool Story!


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