September 11, 2009
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As I'm sitting here, in this box-shaped room, staring at my prey three feet away from me, I am anxious. This child, an innocent child, will die. She is nothing to me, nothing at all. When she wakes, only then will she notice my presence. She is sleeping calmly, probably dreaming sweet childish fantasies of blue skies and purple unicorns flying to see a magical princess. Little does she know that in a few short hours her rosey red complexion will fade away to meet a dull white color. Little does she know that the curls that surround her face will fade and cover a life-less dull face. Little does she know of her radiant blue eyes fading with the sunset. Unlike the sun, her eyes will never surface again.

~Little does she know of the monster I am~

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Bobin-pin said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 9:24 am
Nice writting it realy got my attention. It was a bit disturbing but i liked your descriptoin.
smartypantsscorpio22 replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 3:03 pm
Thank you! =)
Lector S. said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 8:27 am
I see why your teacher would be worried, but really really nice job. I could easily see this being the Prologue to a good story. Are you going to write more?
smartypantsscorpio22 replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 10:02 am
I've got the second part written out but I haven't put it up yet. The second one is actually really gorey.
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