Bite

September 1, 2009
By Anonymous

It was dark. The moonlight filtered through the windows of my bedroom, casting the room into a silver glow. There were plenty of stars out tonight, standing like dreams waiting to be unleashed.
Piercing the tranquil aura of the previous moment, an unexpected dull and distant thud made my heart pound erratically against my chest.
I tugged my bedclothes tighter around me, drawing them upward until they reached my chin. Abruptly, a shadow flickered across the wall.
I tried to steady my suddenly rapid breathing. I gasped, beginning to panic as I heard movement in the corner of the room, which was obscured by lurking shadows.
I saw a colossal, bear-sized shape approach me, moving with agile grace. The beast made no sound. Terror surged through my body, pulsing through my veins like a drug.
A glimpse of the animal made me clutch my throat in horror.
His black, fur shrouded body was hunched, crouched, cautious. It had a very large, bare torso, long and muscular arms, and strong legs. His eyes were the colour of deep, liquid-red blood and they were sharp, observant. They flickered here and there, scanning for the possibility of movement from others. The beast had a small snout, and beneath this, lips curled around sinister-looking teeth, ready to rip and shred.
I was desperate to scream, reach out and push the monster away, or even just cover my eyes. But I was frozen in rigid shock; Unable to defend myself as the creature leant forward and deeply inhaled the scent of my skin.
For one brief moment, he gazed intently into my eyes. The face, that horrifically hideous face without warning turned ravenous. His eyes glinted in excited contentment as he leant back into an even lower crouch, ready to pounce, to strike.


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I forced my lead-heavy lids to open. I gasped as I began to wake up and feel a searing pain at the side of my neck. I writhed in agony as the pain at my throat blazed uncontrollably. I could not recognise my surroundings, the pain blurring my vision. A tortured scream tore through my lips, the pain unbearable.
I felt a gentle, yet firm hand attempt to soothe me, stroking my face with a loving touch. I forced myself to go beyond the pain to see the face of the person comforting me. Eventually, I saw a face, wavering before my eyes, rippling like a sheet of water. But I would always recognise that face. I would do anything for him.
Just to see his face, which looked like an angel’s through my eyes. Just to hear his alluring laugh. Just to touch the unblemished surface of his skin. Just to feel his misty breath on my cheek, to taste the minty-sweetness of his tongue…
Michael.
I loved Michael so passionately, I would murder just to be with him. I know he returns my love.
But for now, just having him here is all I could do to live past the pain that is tormenting me so. With all the strength I had left, I slid my hand over and grasped his free hand, holding it tight.
‘I love you Michael”, was my last thought as I drifted into a pain-filled slumber.


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I did not choose this life, a life of suffering. For me, my family, and those I love. One bite has thrust my life into unreversable torturing. Now, I am doomed to a fate where I will never be normal or human again.
I am a monster.
Whether I like it or not, I am a monster. A werewolf, never to be changed again.


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A soft thud jerked me out of my thoughts. Michael visits me nearly every night. But this night was different. I had tried so desperately to tell him not to come, but after that fateful evening, he would never stay away.
A figure emerged from deep within the shadows.
“Hi,” Michael whispered.
I took a deep breath before answering in a controlled voice, “I told you not to come.”
“You can’t honestly believe I would stay away, could you?” He replied.
“No,” I sighed.
“Okay, spill.” Michael said matter-of-factly. “I know something is up.”
“Nope. Everything’s fine, I swear. You just have to leave. You’re going to get caught!”
“When have I ever been caught before? You’re Dad sleeps like the dead.”
“Please! You don’t understand!” I begged.
The scent of Michael’s skin wafted over me, and the helpless human body I loved so strongly seemed so inviting… I had the sudden urge to lunge…
“Then help me to!”
“I can’t tell you. It’s not that I don’t want to. You won’t ever want to be around me again if I tell you. Trust me.”
Michael leant forward, pain behind his eyes. He took my face in his hands and a look of sympathy crossed his face.
“I will always love you, no matter what has happened. It’s your turn to trust me.”
I fell into his arms struggling not to cry. I lost the battle. Tears streamed down my face, despite me trying to force them back. Michael cradled me in a tight embrace, waiting. Now a look of expectancy had begun to make itself shown.
I did not know how long I wept for. It could have been a mere minute, or it could have been an hour. All I know is that when my tears had finally begun to subside, Michael’s expression had not faded.
Do I tell him that I am a beast? A werewolf? That I could kill him with my eyes closed at this very moment? He would never look at me the same again.
But I don’t know how long I could keep a secret from him. It would betray our trust in each other, I know it would. And if I don’t tell him, what would I say to him now? I could never survive without him. But I know that I can’t be with him. I would kill him! I can transform into an untamed monster at any moment, and I would have no control of my actions.
Do I stay with him, and risk his life? Or leave and risk both of our sanity?
That, I could not do. Leave him forever, make him believe that I did not love him. No, I could not do that.
I would have to tell him.
“Michael?” I began my voice hoarse.
“Yes?”
“Please understand… you have to believe me. You must swear never to tell anybody what is about to escape from my lips. Never!”
Michael nodded in reply.
“I’m not… human anymore. That night, an animal crept into my room, and it bit me.” I struggled, dreading Michael’s reaction. “ I am… a werewolf”.
Michael stayed perfectly still, his expression unfathomable.
“Mike?”
“But…werewolves are just a myth…”
I shook my head, wishing it were true.
“I don’t know if I should be with you… I could kill you, Mike!”
Michael’s mouth dropped open before his expression turned fierce. Oh no. I would know that look anywhere. He’s made up his mind about something, and Michael’s not one to change his decision.
“What?” I queried a suspicious tone to my voice.
“Bite me”. He said fiercely. “If this is the only way we can be together, then bite me.”
“No way!” I would have shouted, but then my dad would wake up. “I’m not going to bite you! It would change your life forever! I didn’t have a choice!”
“But I do.” Michael replied. Our gaze became locked together. That face I loved so much was in pain. I could not bear to see that.
“I can’t. I can’t do that to you. We’re only young! You’re only young! You could do so much with your life. Don’t let me interfere.” My heart ached in sorrow. I didn’t want to have to make this decision.
“And besides, I might not be able to control that I don’t kill you. Will I be able to stop with only one bite?”
Michael remained silent for a long time.
“Yes.’ He eventually replied. “I trust you.”
I shook my head slowly.
“Please.” He whispered. “We could have a life together. We could go and live somewhere deep in the forest… you don’t have to do this alone.”
I mulled all that he had said over in my mind. Sure, I would love for him to support me, but is our young love enough to last a lifetime?
‘Yes,’ I decided. If this is what he wants…
I looked up into Michael’s eyes. Hadn’t I said I would do anything for him? This was my chance to prove my love.
I smiled, and immediately Michael knew my answer. His eyes lit up with excitement.
“I love you.” I whispered as I carefully pressed my teeth to his throat.


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on Oct. 19 2012 at 10:58 am
NaomiLee BRONZE, Ravenden, Arkansas
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Hello! I did very much like this peice, but it does remind me a bit of the twilight series, which I did not enjoy, but this, I did. Perhaps maybe you should make it a bit more original? And hey guys, check out my poem "Me" please. -Naomi

on Sep. 26 2012 at 8:53 am
AudesEsseInsignis, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
When nothing goes right, go left.

You could’ve added a little more to the story, like after she was bitten, you could have written about how she coped with herself the next days and other things. But otherwise it's a great story!

on Dec. 17 2011 at 6:30 pm
Eliahumandoglover SILVER, San Francisco, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't say the old lady screamed. Bring her on and let her scream." --Mark Twain "Being tactful is saying someone is open-minded when they have a hole in their head."by???

Its kind of cliche.

Aren't there lots of werewolf books out there?


on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:42 pm
Sophia.Veritas SILVER, Na, California
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Favorite Quote:
Jane Eyre:

"You examine me, Ms. Eyre. Do you think me handsome?"
...
"No, sir."

I have to agree, pretty Twilightesque, but alsp "pretty" good! :p

on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:12 pm
Savannalore SILVER, North Branch, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Art is all about mistakes and knowing which ones to keep.

 

It's was pretty good writing, but the storyline is overdone. You didn't do anything to make it original, you just wrote what you've read in other books and seen in movies. Come up with something new! :)


bye 23 said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 6:29 pm

RIGHT at the begginning it went super emotional put turnd happy :>

 


on Sep. 4 2011 at 9:11 am
WednesdayWrites BRONZE, Yarmouth Port, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We are not amused." --Queen Victoria

This story grabbed me from the beginning. It's very emotional and passionate, with a dark and supernatural edge--well-written, too, with nice description and dialogue. I would agree with some other commenters that it does have some "Twilight"-esque elements, but I think it's fine to draw inspiration from other works when you're starting out. Try building on your ideas. You have a great start here!

on Aug. 13 2011 at 3:34 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

great job! check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and please comment/rate it

on Feb. 18 2011 at 8:06 am
Touchstone BRONZE, Calcutta, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads Diverged in a wood....
And i chose the one less trodden black....

mavrone

Nannakins said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 10:50 pm
okay i like it...but it is way to much like twilight like the whole i didn't have a choice but i do part...if your gonna continue u might wanna change it a bit. :)

Alice_C SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 4:51 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be."-unknown

love it

it is so good

write more


on Oct. 5 2010 at 9:41 pm
communicativedistractions PLATINUM, Fall City, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I miss you like an alcoholic misses toothpaste."

This is the best short story I've ever read!! It does sound like twilight but that makes it passionate! I have a boyfriend named Michael and this DEFINATELY explains how I feel. All the trust and love :) GREAT JOB!!

on Sep. 17 2010 at 3:16 pm
traveler03 GOLD, San Juan, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Living is nothing. Dreaming is something.

I agree with the whole Twilight thing. It sounds too much like it but the description is fantastic.

on Jul. 13 2010 at 8:18 pm
Leona123 SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
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Keep writing! You had me on the edge of my seat the entire time!

 


on Jul. 13 2010 at 8:51 am
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

I can only come up with one word for this story: breathtaking.

on May. 8 2010 at 9:25 am
MusicIsLife013 SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Light, like the flutter of wings, feel your hollow voice rushing into me
As you're longing to sing" -AFI

"Here we go again, I kinda wanna be more than friends, so take it easy on me I'm afraid you're never satisfied." -Neon Trees

this is sooo good!! Check out some of my work!!!

on Apr. 16 2010 at 8:23 pm
LostOrGained SILVER, Deltona, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Light a man a fire, he is warm for a day. Light a man on fire, and he is warm for the rest of his life."

No offense, but young love doesnt last. And when it ends, your a wreck.

on Mar. 21 2010 at 9:14 am
Dark-hunterfan1995 BRONZE, Battle Creek, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“...Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win.”

Stephen King

i liked it alot!!!

on Feb. 9 2010 at 11:22 am
two critiques: the punctuation is off on this and i think mike reminded me of Edward from Twilight waaaaaay too much. perfect. just saying you might want to be careful of that! :) good job though!

J. Rae said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:01 pm
This was awesome! I was expecting another vampire story. Werewolves are a less ventured topic, but you did wonderful at making it seem real and original.




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