Serene Forest

May 27, 2009
By Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius


There was a place on this dangerous, greedy, and hatred filled Earth where peace and love were abundant. This place, where shimmering, crashing waterfalls concealed themselves in the lush green forest, was the place where I learned to love. It was full of passion, from the glistening, smooth pebbles to the whispering sigh in the wind. Romance bloomed in the hearts of those who would breathe in the sweet scents of honeysuckles and the mouthwatering smells of the orange blossoms. Butterflies fluttered from daisies to cherry blossoms mixing even more exotic fragrances into the air. Dragonflies flitted across ponds and streams lightly kissing the surface before flying off at nearly invisible speeds. Wild horses galloped across meadows tinted pink from growing snapdragons. Doves cooed in the early morning as the sun brightened the sky with pastel colors. Robins and Blue Jays kept the day alive while happily singing their songs back and forth.

When lost hearts came upon this magically beautiful land they became entranced in the warm sunbeams shining down through the green foliage casting a mystical light over everything. They came and found themselves cleansing their bodies in the coolness of the water. They washed themselves free of all pain and loneliness and enjoyed its taste of the finest wine trickling down their throats. Reluctantly, they left to tell their loved ones about this mysterious land but to only realize that they could not find it again…except for me.


The author's comments:
I honestly wrote this because I was bored and I was listening to instumental music.

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:10 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

haha... dont we all?

on May. 7 2010 at 2:11 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

wow, that is beauutiful!!!!!!! verryy descriptive:) i wanna go there.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:13 pm
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

Thanks! I'll make sure to get to it as soon as I can.

on Feb. 11 2010 at 10:23 pm
have_a_heart GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Parting is all we know of heaven and all we need of hell.

that was really nice. the descriptions and imagery was amazing :)

if you get a chance could you take a look at one of my pieces. my main one is 'Suicide Story'

on Jan. 26 2010 at 11:32 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

Thank you! I have some things still getting approved also. You might like them.

on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:06 am
ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"you know that place between asleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? thats where i love you peter pan, thats where i'll be waiting" Tinkerbell

the language is great, and , as a result -t he imagery is really strong. I love the dreamy/relaxing/fantasy feel ...really like this.

x

on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:02 pm
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

in the forums section I posted part of a novel I'm writing. It's only the first chapter and half of the second chapter but I'm working on the rest. Check it out and comment. It's under writing and has my name (Chickadee) next to it.

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on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:28 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

I really enjoyed the language...it creates a fantasy setting that's just relaxing and forest-like with the mentioning of unicorns and fairies! the first paragraph just created a wonderful image in my head. check out some of my writing...you might enjoy some of it i think. tell me when you post new things too! i'd love to read more of your stuff!


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