I am a Monster

April 25, 2009
By JohnTalbot GOLD, Dixon, Missouri
JohnTalbot GOLD, Dixon, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rather be starving free, than be a fat slave.


I wonder why human blood tastes like iron.I hear the pounding of a human haert as I stalk them waiting patiently. I see victims that truly have no hope to escape me. I want not to be like I am... a Vampire. I am a Monster!

I pretend to be human. I feel like an omen plaguing my victims. I touch their souls tainting them with evil. I worry one day that one day I will condemn someone with a life like mine. I cry or, at least I try. I am a Monster
I understand that I am practically evil itself. I say that one day my time will pass and i will burn in the pit of fire. I dream that I`m not the monster I am. I try not to be a monster, but I can`t be something I`m not. I hope that someday I will no longer have to burden my victims with the fear that they might.... be next. I am a MONSTER....


The author's comments:
I wrote this in the point of view of a Vampire. One that wishes he was not the monster he is...

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FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2012 at 6:27 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

great. its a bit like edward from twilight, doncha think? tee hee can you check out some of my work?

on Sep. 14 2011 at 8:14 pm
clumsyteardropper SILVER, Roslyn, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't help others, if you yourself need help" -my sister ;) love it!

wow, pretty good... although, i'd be careful... people might start thinkin you actully are one. EEPS! haha ;)  nice work!

on May. 30 2009 at 2:35 am
JohnTalbot GOLD, Dixon, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rather be starving free, than be a fat slave.

thanx for the comments. lol

csjames GOLD said...
on May. 20 2009 at 5:53 pm
csjames GOLD, Cowpens, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone's a critic, but only you can decide if it affects Y-O-U!!!

It's like Edward's thoughts

on May. 7 2009 at 11:10 pm
*LunaNight* GOLD, Staten Island, New York
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that was really good. twilight, watch out! here comes John of Dixon.....:)




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