Demons Night Out

April 9, 2009
By Meagan Loring BRONZE, Camden, Maine
Meagan Loring BRONZE, Camden, Maine
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It was dark out and the moon was red and so was the sky. Something was wrong but what? It was June 6Th of 2006. the day the demons came out to play their games. One demon in particular loved playing his little “games”. His name was Louie Sabato he was 16 years old and had long black hair pale skin, dark brown/ red eyes wearing chained black pants, black converse sneakers, a torn black t- shirt, twenty nine piercings, and a burn mark that looked like a three inch tattoo of a pentagram with two puncture wounds that were on his neck. He always had a double ended dagger with a evil curse carved in the middle of it for the hilt. Your probably thinking he is a psychotic teenager with the urge to kill things, but there is one thing I did not tell you he has fangs and they were not fake. You see?? That might change your mind just a little bit. His favorite thing to do was hunting for blood whether it was from a animal or a human. Louie preferred animal blood.
That night there were to teenagers aged 16 and 17 both brother and sister, a girl named Mira and a boy named Nalu. They were walking around the local park, they both sat down on a bench and looked at the sky. Their family were the only ones who knew what was going on. Mira hoped that she was going to be alive when the date read 666. Nalu on the other hand was not too happy about the date. He was more scared than he had ever been in his life. Their grandparents told them stories about all of the demons and what they did good or bad. Mira was determined to meet the demons before or after she died.
Mira read all of the books that her mom and dad passed down to her at least 30 times through. They have been passed down to her through the generations of her family. Nalu was just not interested in them. Nalu only wanted to read car magazines like “ Hot Rod”. She realized that she had three books. Her favorite one was called “necrology” in it was a list of names of the people who have died. Every time someone had died their names would be added to the last page of the book and the cause of their death. Mira loved to read page 1623, it said;
“ Name: Louie Marten Sabato
Date or birth: April 29Th, 1490
Date of death: September 30Th 1506
Cause of death: a blood sucking evil spirit who is known to be dead, that can turn mortals into immortal”
Mira read further on and saw that he was buried in Transylvania but accidentally dug back up in Salem Massachusetts in the year of 1993. How that’s unknown. The men did not know what the box was or where it came from or how it even got there. It made the men very curious so they decided to open it. Inside they saw a male teenagers body in perfect condition. The body was very pale almost white and it had long black hair, and looked like it could be 16 or 17 years old. The only odd the mysterious body was the marks on the neck.
When the men saw those marks on his neck they slowly backed away still facing the body and called the cops. They explained to the dispatch about the body they had just found, and the dispatch thought they were trying to pull off a stupid hoax, but decided to send the cops to the location any way. When the men and the police arrived they body was gone and all that was left behind was the wooden coffin.

The author's comments:
I wright alot of these this one in particular has 8 parts (chapt.) all together

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This article has 4 comments.

lily said...
on May. 12 2009 at 12:26 am

don't dis vamps

ZenGirl SILVER said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 2:53 am
ZenGirl SILVER, Taber, Alta, Other
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Try to show the reader and not tell, but do keep it up!

Calina BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2009 at 4:18 pm
Calina BRONZE, Forest Park, Georgia
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keep up the good work.

you're a wonderful writer =]


on Apr. 25 2009 at 9:55 pm
Mr.Omega BRONZE, Champaign, Illinois
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Pretty good story, but try to work on punctuation and grammar. but other than that, keep up the good work.

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