April 2, 2009
By Julie Metz BRONZE, Maurertown, Virginia
Julie Metz BRONZE, Maurertown, Virginia
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they sat on the front porch, avoiding what needed to be said, "I love you, but how can we keep going on like this? All we do is fight." she looked up tears weliing in her eyes, the sight of her broke him even more than he already was..he pulled her to her feet and held her tightly, locked his hands to the side of her face wiped her damp cheeks and kissed her with more passion than ever before. They knew they couldn't just give up...too many things to throw away to just let go. They could work it out. Their love could overcome any obstacle, they both felt that sensation by holding one another and danced. Swayed to the music of their connection.

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Obi-Wan BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2013 at 2:01 am
Obi-Wan BRONZE, Bel Air, Maryland
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I  sure wish some boys would understand this stuff

on Oct. 15 2010 at 10:52 pm
Mortie PLATINUM, Oak Run, California
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Favorite Quote:
Whats The Point?

that was good. short, sweet, and to the point...

i liked it


on Dec. 11 2009 at 1:30 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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umm i love it

on Dec. 5 2009 at 9:54 am
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thats very good!!! it is so tru. any1 can work thro problems, u just have 2 have faith!!! keep writting


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