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A simply perfect date

March 27, 2015
By Yourfathersgmail BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
Yourfathersgmail BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't f*** with the Chuck*


* He is nineteen and he asks her on a date,
go out with me!, it will be fun!
She smiles, and shows kindness and love
something that is naturally human in speech.

They’re in the car
driving to the place they go
a bit awkward at first they don’t dare speak
both of them are blushing red and are so
uncomfortable with one another.

She smiles, that smile you see
Something you’d Imagine in your dreams
He smiled and wouldn’t dare look her way.
He wonders if they even see eye to eye

They exit the car, together smiling hand in hand
She nearly falls, yet he catches her at last.
In his arms she feels safe unlike all the guys before
this one was the miracle of them all.

She leans in for a kiss, there are no words that could express
the feelings that were demonstrated, she felt weightless as if she
was standing only on air. “I love you” She says
and says only once, until the man replies.

The relationship burns bright, so much warmth like a bolt of light
but she hold him tight, and refuses to let go, until having come closer,
she realizes there is no where else closer to go.

At last they leave together, finishing their date
and heading home, as they leave she moves in
closer to his ear, and states “I love you” once more
to the man who replies with the sun in his eyes
“I love you too” He states, “I love you so much”

In the manner of “Do you love me?”
By Robert Wrigley


The author's comments:

Completely fictional, I guess an imagination of a relationship with a girl I have strong feelings for. Maybe one day I can share my love with this person one day but not right now.


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