Love at First Kiss

November 20, 2008
By Romance Buie, JC, NJ

I stroke my fingers through her hair. The tension between us is rising. She and I both know its coming. I lean my head towards her and she does the same. Our lips connect like magnets. The perfect kiss. After about 8 sec I slowly pull my face away from her face and put it so that my nose would be connected with her nose. She looks at me keenly and smiles. We stay in that position for about 5 minutes. Just by that kiss we know more about each other than we could ever know. We were saving it for when we knew we were truly right for each other. But now were certain there’s nothing that can break this bond between true love.


The author's comments:
This piece i did in school and thought it might be cool if everyone could enjoy so i put it on Teen Ink

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on Aug. 3 2014 at 5:00 pm
carissathestoryteller GOLD, Bremen, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Remember... that each child is a separate person. Yours forever, but never fully yours. She can never be all you wished or wanted or all you know she could be. But she will be a better human being if you can let her be herself. ~Stella Chess

So cute!!!

katie43 said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 12:49 am
This is adorable! :)

on Aug. 25 2011 at 6:20 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

AWWWWWWW!!! This was so cute!!!:):):);)

booklover008 said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 4:13 pm
AWWWWWW *CUTE**

on Oct. 3 2009 at 11:52 am
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

haha, cute


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