November 1, 2008
I was swinging all alone. I could hear it squeak as I went up and down. A cold breeze ran through my bones as a tear rolled down my face. As usual I had been thinking about you. You said my name. My swing had almost completley stopped. I was dropping tears constantly.

But then I felt something give me a push. ImmediatelyI picked my chin up. I waited until I had stopped moving. I looked back, and there you were. I said your name leaping from my seat and into your open arms. I was crying with joy. We hugged. I never wanted to let you go again. If only that moment would have lasted forever, just like our love.

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DarkPoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 9:53 pm
i love it nice work
Pinkwolf156 said...
Apr. 5, 2014 at 12:59 pm
that was the best one i ever heard, it reminded me of me and my love!!!!
CarolElaine said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 12:25 pm
Sweet...I love happy endings!
steviesgirl69 replied...
Nov. 21, 2013 at 9:19 am
awwww i write love peoms all the time. you are really good at it keep doing these poems<3
librarylady said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 9:52 am
Visually stimulating and touching.
HBCdance This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 6:08 pm
Short and sweet; I love it. Perfect.
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