Empty promises

April 24, 2012
By W.Bishop SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
W.Bishop SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
6 articles 4 photos 0 comments

“I’m not leaving forever” Bella whispered into the phone.
“You promised Bell” Sam wiped the tears meandering down his cheeks.
“Aren’t you happy for me?”
“You just don’t understand” he sighed as he flipped open the tiny box, a crystal diamond reflected in his eyes.
He shut it.

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on May. 11 2012 at 7:50 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I liked this because it was short but captivating. Good job!

on Apr. 27 2012 at 5:59 pm
Twinn4ever SILVER, Pflugerville, Texas
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Umm..its good so far, i think you need to finish the story, or make it longer


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