The end

April 6, 2012
By Anonymous

The female cries out in pain as she sits herself up. She finds herself laying in a very scary puddle of blood. She inhales deeply, and her lungs fill with a burning sensation.
She stands herself up to examine her surrounding area. She sees a brightly burning object, a street, and a figure walking in her direction. She incoherently screams something in the direction of the figure, but is not sure if she hears a reply. She takes a step toward the figure. Suddenly, an excruciating pain fills her chest, right above her breasts. She puts her hand on the center of the pain, and suddenly everything goes blank. She collapses to the floor.

The author's comments:
I honestly didn't even expect to write this. It just came to me in first period one day during free write. This is only the introduction to the story. I'll say whenever my first chapter is up. I hope you enjoy it, and leave any comments

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