Seductionist

March 5, 2012
By TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.


“Easy, easy,” he whispers gently, soothing her so-soft shoulder with light, teasing fingertips. He leans over to her ear. “Be easy, beautiful… be easy…”

Her flesh quivers beneath his hand, responding to his tone. It feels so good when he does that! But still she steps away, once, unsure of herself.

“Easy,” he whispers softly, stepping with her, stroking slowly, so slowly, “no need to be afraid. I swear it. Any oath you choose…” Her flesh responds again. He smiles warmly, utterly filled with an extremely patient desire and invitation. He is, in that moment, consumed utterly with the sole purpose of seduction.

I will be gentle with this one. It is her first time. She has every right to be nervous. I will make it easy for her, something to remember. “Be easy… be easy, beautiful—“

In one fluid motion, he swings up. And just as promptly, is back on the ground, both pride and body bruised. The mare dances away from him, utterly un-seduced.

The author's comments:
I don't usually write things like this, but I read something kind of similar in a book, and thought to try it myself. Quite fun actually! This is my first piece, please comment!

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on Jan. 15 2013 at 2:53 pm
AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
being single doesn't mean you are week it means that you are strong enough to wait for what you deserve! -Niall Horan

This is interesting! not my style but well written. :)

MaddiK BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 8:19 am
MaddiK BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
4 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no great writing, only great re-writing."

Haha, I dont know too much about horses, but it would be interesting to try!

TTTeeSS GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 7:15 am
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.

It had been in italics, so that it was his thoughts, but the article posting doesn't let you do them.

on Apr. 18 2012 at 11:59 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I like this. It's kinda nice, especially the ending. I'm kinda confused one the second to the last part though. You used third person in the first part and then switch to the third.


Great writing though :)))

butterfly123 said...
on Apr. 7 2012 at 10:28 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hehehe nice one :D

on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:26 pm
Lady_Lemon GOLD, Franklin, Wisconsin
11 articles 1 photo 43 comments
dang child! shows what he gets! ;) anyways, great job. I would just focus on making your character a little more... prominent. In what he's doing and why. :)

on Mar. 7 2012 at 8:51 pm
DrivenToBizarre BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
1 article 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who say sunshine brings happiness, have not yet danced in the rain."

This is amazing! I was totally sucked in right away! Keep up the great work! 

sidneyc1997 said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 7:06 pm
u bloo my mind

sidc said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 6:58 pm
woooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww you made my day

TTTeeSS GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 4:59 pm
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.

Thank you! Very fun to write! I'd love to see what you could do along these lines!

MaddiK BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 2:58 pm
MaddiK BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
4 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no great writing, only great re-writing."

Ha! I love this! Great work Tess!

Djensen92 said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 6:17 pm
I love this! The author really paints a picture of seduction!


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