Kiss me in the Rain

February 11, 2012
By Softballlover3015 SILVER, Holland Patent, New York
Softballlover3015 SILVER, Holland Patent, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It doesn't matter how old you are. It only mattes how much effort you put into it and what that effort accomplishes you" --Coach C.


Jessica didn't mind walking to class in the morning and she didn't mind rain, but together they were a mess. Even underneath her purple umbrella, she was still getting drops of rain in her hair. Slowly, the straight strands of dirty blonde hair were becoming curly despite her efforts. Jessica's favorite song was blasting from her headphones in her ears. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She fumbled to wipe off her wet hands and pull out her phone. As soon as she saw who the message was from her, heart started beating faster.

Hey

The message read. It was from Him.

Hi:)

She responded carefully deciding whether to put a smiley face. She figure it couldn't hurt and sent the message.

What are you doing?

What should she say? The truth? That was probably the best.

Walking in the rain to class :

The rain was really pounding on her umbrella now like tiny grenades falling from the PMSing mother nature.

Ever been kissed in the rain?

That was it. The one thing that made her heart beat even faster. Her fingers fumbled as she typed the response.

No...? Why?

What could he possibly mean by that? Why did guys have to be so confusing. She pulled out one of her headphones in an attempt to dry it off. Then, came another vibration from her phone.

Look behind you.

Slowly, she turned around with a breathless look in her eyes. Her heart was beating so loud it sounded like a drum in her ears. And there he was. Walking only a few feet behind her. Jessica turned completely, utterly shocked. He walked right up to her, cupped her face and kissed her. The blood rushed to her face as her hands and umbrella fell to her side. He was kissing her. Right there. In the rain. Then he pulled away smiling. Her phone buzzed.

I love you.

It was perfect

The author's comments:
A story about a girl and a boy and A kiss in the Rain.
inspiration came from www.letterstocrushes.com

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on Sep. 8 2014 at 3:50 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is amazing. I love it. It's so sweet. You're a very talented and wonderful person and writer. Thank you for sharing this! ^_^

on Aug. 21 2013 at 1:48 am
ElvenGlory GOLD, Pocatello, Idaho
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What a sweet and wonderful story! Loved it!!!!

. said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 3:12 pm
Thank you!

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on Feb. 20 2012 at 6:15 am
Daphne, Shanghai, Other
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aww! I loved this story :) It has such a sweet ending! If only my life was this perfect

on Feb. 18 2012 at 2:42 pm
Caroline Skjoedt BRONZE, Johns Creek, Georgia
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This is a lovely story. It's so simple and adorable.

on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:38 am
BabyBlue04 BRONZE, Mauk, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
If you think I am quiet, then you are not good enough to hear my voice XD I was voted most quietest in my Senior Class. c/o 2012!! Woot woot!

I loved it a lot. very few grammatical errors. very simple and to the point XD

on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:12 am
Softballlover3015 SILVER, Holland Patent, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It doesn't matter how old you are. It only mattes how much effort you put into it and what that effort accomplishes you" --Coach C.

Thank you!

on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:11 am
Softballlover3015 SILVER, Holland Patent, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It doesn't matter how old you are. It only mattes how much effort you put into it and what that effort accomplishes you" --Coach C.

Thank you!

on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:09 am
Softballlover3015 SILVER, Holland Patent, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It doesn't matter how old you are. It only mattes how much effort you put into it and what that effort accomplishes you" --Coach C.

Thank You!

on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:07 am
Softballlover3015 SILVER, Holland Patent, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It doesn't matter how old you are. It only mattes how much effort you put into it and what that effort accomplishes you" --Coach C.

Thank you!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 10:21 pm
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
26 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

awww! That was the sweetest thing i've ever read. It made me laugh and cry...the perfect story :) really great job.

on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:33 pm
artfullymade14 BRONZE, Chesapeak, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live as if you'll die tomorrow, dream as if you'll live forever."
-Unknown Author

so sweet and innocent :) its the perfect simple moment that every girl dreams of :) loved it!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:30 pm
ginger1993 GOLD, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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so sweet and almost made me cry. :)

on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:48 am
Miranda_K. BRONZE, Donora, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I am only one, but still I am one; I cannot do everything but still I can do something; and because I cannot do everything I will not refuse to do something I can do.







~ Edward E. Hale

Sweet, innocent, and breathtaking. Loved it!


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