All This Time.

November 3, 2011
By PeachyKeen2 BRONZE, Greensboro, North Carolina
PeachyKeen2 BRONZE, Greensboro, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

I sat with my legs crossed on the ground and I was sitting there looking up to the sky, out to the ocean. I could see the waves crashing and I could see the sun beginning its departure for the day. I was waiting for you to come up and to talk to me from behind. I was always waiting for you to show up, but I was always disappointed to see that you weren’t right here sitting next to me. I remember him. I was talking to him. A different him. And he was nice, I guess you could say. We got along very well and we were friendly towards one another. He had feelings toward me, that I had no intention of feeling back. He wasn’t the one for me and I knew it too. Looking back to the ocean I uncross my legs to let them stretch forth, and the wind brought a breeze I needed to feel. It was a breath of fresh air. I had told that different boy that I did not like him the way he liked me. That I thought it was better to be “just friends,” but he took it the wrong way. Yelled at me. I thought we were friends, but I guess I was wrong about that too. I guess I am wrong about a lot of things. He wasn’t what I wanted. He was just a boy that was filling a spot that needed to be filled. But. I now realize that I could never let just any boy fill that spot needing filling. It had to be someone special; it had to be someone that understood me.
It had to be you.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Apr. 27 2012 at 9:47 am
PeachyKeen2 BRONZE, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Thanks so much! I would love if you read some of my other work and give me some feedback! Thanks again!

on Nov. 14 2011 at 12:35 pm
KittyKatKrawls_ SILVER, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Hello PeachyKeen2

This piece is quite intriguing and the ending lines really put an indention in the heart. Great little piece! Stay Peachy!



natty5 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 5:25 pm
natty5 BRONZE, West Dundee, Illinois
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I like this a lot!

on Nov. 10 2011 at 8:28 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Oh wow. He yelled at you?

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