October 15, 2011
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His beauty was blinding as he smiled at her. His eyes were like a puddle she was drowning in. His laugh chimed in the open air and his lips formed words that she was only half listening to. The light that shone in her eyes was noticeable and the smile on her face was caused by him and him only.

She hadn’t meant for any of this to happen but in a heart beat he had her in his trap. She knew that he would never feel the way she had for him but she hoped. And she clung onto that hope like it was her own life.

Her heart had fallen deep and it had no way of climbing out.

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raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 4:59 pm
Reading a relationship type poem usually leaves me feeling a little....blahh. But I really liked this one; the imagery, word usage, and flow were really there. Great work! :)
alicecullen said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:19 pm
i can see how deeply fallen in love you were.  amazingg<3
Wonderment said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 3:31 pm

I like it. Its cute the way you describe love at first sight. I love it lots


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