The Deepness of Love

October 24, 2011
By SmileyBabe SILVER, Union, Connecticut
SmileyBabe SILVER, Union, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever"


My name is Alecia Goodberg. I'm in 8th grade and I have a crush on this total hottie! He is so cute. When I see him my heart flutters. His name is Justin Varsich. Oh he is such a cutie. To bad he really doesn't know that I exist. He has a locker five doors down. I'm a cheerleader, and he's a football player. He's dating the head cheerleader. Regina is such a jerk. She thinks that her dad has money, she's so popular. She's only popular. Well anyways today is the first day Justin actually said "Hey whats up, sweetheart?" I actually blushed. He winked and walked away. Regina was ten lockers down and growled. She then turned and followed him. He quickly turned and told her to leave him alone. He looked at me and smiled.


The author's comments:
To want more wait until the next part.... Regina gets dumped and Alecia gets a chance, does it work out! FIND OUT!

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on Feb. 15 2012 at 9:35 am
SmileyBabe SILVER, Union, Connecticut
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"Whatever"

Hurry is out!!!!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 3:51 pm
carmensandiego BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
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"Dance as though no one is watching you. Love as though you've never been hurt before. Sing as though no one can hear you. Live as though heaven is on earth."

yippee!!!!!!

on Jan. 5 2012 at 5:55 pm
SmileyBabe SILVER, Union, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 16 comments

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"Whatever"

yes plz comment on all of mine and once hurry comes out ill tell u because i believe tht 1 is good

on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:46 am
SmileyBabe SILVER, Union, Connecticut
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"Whatever"

I sumited the second part and added descriptions. Thank you very very much :) xxxx

Eggie94 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 10:05 am
Eggie94 BRONZE, Palmdale, California
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"With great power comes great responsibility" --Bruce Wayne

I liked the idea though it seems to lack a little originality and does lack a lot of description. I think it could be really good you just need to add more description:)) keep it up!

flutesmile said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 8:10 pm
I loved the idea and it seems interesting but it think that it needs some emotions in ot but i loved the idea

on Oct. 29 2011 at 9:45 am
carmensandiego BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
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"Dance as though no one is watching you. Love as though you've never been hurt before. Sing as though no one can hear you. Live as though heaven is on earth."

LOVE IT!!!!!! Are you gonna write more?????

on Oct. 28 2011 at 5:18 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
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You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

i thought that this was a good writing. im really excited to find out what happens next but i think that you could have put more heart and time into this writing. im not hatin or anything i think its good but yeah... nice job

on Oct. 27 2011 at 11:52 pm
AnnieLovesMusic SILVER, Jeffreys Bay, Other
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Life's not about surviving the storm its about dancing in the rain ~ Taylor Swift

Hey SmileyBabe,
This story looks like it has some real potential!I'd really like to read ther next part...just 1 smaaaall thing maybe you should add sdme more descriptions so that we can picture the characters :)
xxxx
Love it!!!

on Oct. 27 2011 at 9:17 am
SmileyBabe SILVER, Union, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever"

Oh, thats fine :)

on Oct. 26 2011 at 5:45 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Ok good:) Can't wait!!! And sorry, don't have a FaceBook

SmileyBabe said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 5:09 pm
OMG! Thank you so so much this means a lot, I will slow it and add more detail I did this at... 5 in the mornin before my dad woke up but yah I'm working on the 2nd part now if you want find me on Facebook at Catherine Brothers and yah I love the name 2 :)

on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:03 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

OOH! OOH! OOH! I WANT TO FIND OUT!!! Haha:D It sounds like it's off to a great start, SmileyBabe (LOVE the name btw:) and PLEASE notify me when the next part comes out on my article "Carrie's Big Mistake"

And for the next part, are you going to make it more detailed? You should, but I don't think this point really matters as it is the first part, just a teeny little peek at what is going to happen in the story. But still, make it more detailed, and please SLOW DOWN. Idk if it is just me, but I felt as though it was a little rushed, but I could still get what is going on. So please write more! I am a total sucker for these types of realistic fiction when the "nerdy" girl, or the girl with "less popularity" gets the guy and the girl gets revenge on the "mean girl" by being herself and he ends up liking her WAY better than he liked the other girl.......So Good Job, and please, Keep Writing!!! :):):);)



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