Cherry Blossom

September 14, 2011
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Your kiss, so tender it makes me want to cry out with joy. Love once nothing, now blooms like a beautiful cherry blossom. The breathtaking flower, so delicate to the touch. Neither of us can spoil a flower so stunning, neither of us wish to cut it back. So we do not. Let us grow together completing one another. You, the only thing that holds me down to the Earth with roots so strong. Know now that I kindly thank thee.





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ChocoMint said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 6:07 pm
I really like the tone you use.  Although it is well written, I felt it was slightly too short.  You need more of an introduction and a conclusion; it was hard for me to get into the flow with that few of sentences.  Good job though
 
billgamesh11 replied...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 8:40 pm
I agree with ChocoMint, it was very short; it migt have done better as a poem, but it was not bad! Keep writing!!! :):):);)
 
Eveine replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 3:18 pm

it's awesome for a poem!!!

 

 
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