Rainy Days

July 18, 2011
I rushed into an empty doorway out of the rain. Jason was right behind me, he never let go of my hand. I leaned against the wall laughing. My soaking hair stuck to my face. Even though I was soaking wet, with his warm body so close to me I wasn’t cold. He smelt like rain and chocolate frosting. Thunder boomed and I laughed a little, but his blue eyes starred into mine with an intensity that made me stop. Then his soft lips were on mine. The world forgot the two of us standing on the abandoned stoop.

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hippiechild said...
Jul. 12, 2013 at 7:59 am
So romantic!
Juicey_Fruit said...
Jun. 18, 2013 at 11:04 am
This is probably the most romanitc thing I've ever read. I love this. You are talented.
BriarRose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 6:01 pm

as short as it is, you manage to convey a lot of emotion and description. It's really impressive that you were able to make a huge impact given the wordcount restrictions; not many people can do that.



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