Moonlit

May 13, 2011
By BlakeAyrl SILVER, Constable, New York
BlakeAyrl SILVER, Constable, New York
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Mess with my mate and i will bear my fangs - Me when Im ticked -
Leave her alone or deal with me - Me when Im ticked -


Walking through the moonlit forest. With every step you take your pace quickens. You turn while running spotting the shadow you heard. Your breath gives in and you sit against the tree. The shadow comes and holds you in his arms. You stare into his bright eyes hoping the sun will never rise. You come closer to your love’s chest as he holds you that much closer. Pressing your head to his chest falling closer to sleep.

You wake up in your bed with your love sitting on your windowsill staring out the window. Your breakfast sitting on the stand. You flash a smile at your love. He smiles back with that look in his eyes that you’re the only one for him.


The author's comments:
I worte this based on the girl im in love with and hope she reads this and knows im always there for her as always.

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on Dec. 9 2011 at 11:41 am
BlakeAyrl SILVER, Constable, New York
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Mess with my mate and i will bear my fangs - Me when Im ticked -
Leave her alone or deal with me - Me when Im ticked -

it was the night before was the first paragraph

on Jun. 20 2011 at 10:11 pm
cookiemonstaaa97 BRONZE, Scotts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Books say: she did this, because. Life says: she did this. Books are where things are explained to you, life where things aren't.
Julian Barnes

i like it. alittle more detail

Mye.Lin SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 12:55 pm
Mye.Lin SILVER, Toronto, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Justify your existence.
Create meaning" -unknown

More info? I didn't really understnad what was happening or the relavance of the first paragraph in relation to the story.


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