Wednesday

April 19, 2011
By Lexie Zettel SILVER, Hartland, Wisconsin
Lexie Zettel SILVER, Hartland, Wisconsin
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Lilly has a smile that can light up the world. Happiest girl you could meet. Straight A’s that were never doubted. Her hair smelled like flowers in May. She never knew what it was like to not be okay. She had never experienced it. That wasn’t a bad thing. If there was no reason to be sad, why would she be?
She knew this boy that made her smile ten times brighter. Made her days ten times better. He would hug her and his warm touch felt like nothing she had ever felt before. His eyes were so honest, she saw nothing but the real him. Just him.
Wednesday. Lilly found out why people cry. Why they hurt day after day. Year after Year. How insomnia came to be. Why down was the only position their eyes took. No more smiles. No more A’s. No more flowers in May. Not okay. No more good days. No more warm touch. No more beautiful eyes. So honest. Just him. No more.


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on Apr. 26 2011 at 7:19 pm
kfelt158 SILVER, New Era, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"A dream will only be a dream until you work hard to make it a reality."

Wow.  That was pretty much breathtaking.  Please check out some of my work, especially "The Red Rose." :) thanks!

on Apr. 24 2011 at 4:47 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

Beautiful, just stunning

on Apr. 24 2011 at 4:24 pm
FlyingNewt BRONZE, Bloomington, Indiana
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this so true and beautiful keep writing

ThatChick said...
on Apr. 23 2011 at 3:44 pm
Thank you (: true story... different names.

on Apr. 23 2011 at 7:36 am
LunarFireworks SILVER, Temple, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Hardest part of the end is starting again,"- Linkin Park

Very good and true, I wish i was the Lilly that never knew 'bout sadnes.....

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on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:14 pm
ssophiaa GOLD, Falls Church, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"You cannot operate from a concern of how you're perceived."
--Kevin Kittle

I love this soooo much! It's so simple, but it's so true. This is great. Write more like this!

on Apr. 21 2011 at 10:02 pm
dreamer11 BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Twenty years from now, it won't matter what kind of shoes you wore, how expensive your jeans were, or how you your hair looked. What will matter is what you learned and how you used it. -Unknown

aww... so sad, but so true




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