My first love

April 8, 2011
By ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"


We walked along the trodden path. Me in my old wellies and fluffy hat, him as gorgeous as ever. I had never fully got how he could go out with someone like me, i wasn't super skinny, i didn't have blonde hair and bright blue eyes, In fact quite the opposite, i had dark hair and green eyes. Plus i had a deep Scottish accent which got me a lot trouble in the very american school where noone could understand me and always though i was insulting them, (they also asked why i didn't have ginger hair, and had i ever seen a wild haggis, that made me laugh hysterically.)
We continued on our endless walk when i tripped on a loose stone and went tumbling down a hill. He came down after me and kept on asking whether i was ok. I stared at him for a second before bursting into unstoppable laughter. I just sat on the damp ground surrronded by leaves, i didn't even know what was funny, but eventually we were both laughing. He sat next to me and pulled a stray twig out of my hair. We stared into each others eyes. I swear i could see deep into his soul, a soul made of the purest gold. He slowly lowered his head to mine and pressed his freezing lips to mine, i shivered. He went to pull away but i held him there unwilling to let him go. His lips were soft and gentle but in the same way, powerful and strong. He pushed me back onto the leaves and kissed me even harder, i was getting cold now so i pushed my hands against him and stood up, for once, he blushed, He was so sweet.
"Sorry he muttered, got abit carried away."he muttered.
I laughed again and he held his hand out to mine and we continued on what would turn out to be the last time i ever saw him.


The author's comments:
I wanted to write something about how the world doesn't always give you a happy ending, that all love even the deepest might not last forever.

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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 13 2011 at 4:13 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I'm still in Middle School so we don't have any of that. 

on May. 13 2011 at 12:58 am
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

Do You were uniforms at your school or is it very sterotypical,  Cheerleaders, american football team, ect...?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 5:27 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I live in Boston, Massachusetts. 

 


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 5:24 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I'll try. :)

on May. 12 2011 at 4:31 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

I love be a glaswegian, what state in america are you from?

on May. 12 2011 at 4:29 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

You should, but make sure you pay a visit to glasgow. and the highlands, its  beautiful up there

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 2:24 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I also know that the city you are from, Glasgow is widely popular and that it's becoming this very trendy place to hang out in. Which is why I think you don't have to worry about jobs! 

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 2:23 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Nope, never been to the UK. I was supposed to go during spring break but I didn't get a chance to go. :(  But I have been to Europe. I've been to France, Spain and Germany. Actually, I might go to Spain this summer!

But originally, all the way back, my family is from scotland. And I know a little bit, like vikings are from there and haggis and bagpipes and kilts. I know that J.K Rowling wrote Harry POtter in Edinburgh, in Scotland. I also know that Prince William went to college in Scotland. Just random stuff like that. 

 


on May. 12 2011 at 1:14 am
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

Oh yeah, ever been to scotland?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2011 at 10:01 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I could really relate to this piece. U should do a sequel of it!! 

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:46 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Yes, I am. Remember me from the Immigration discussion? Same person. :)

on May. 11 2011 at 2:53 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

Yeah, im a girl, are you american?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2011 at 6:37 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Hi again! I like this piece. There is a lot of deep stuff in there. :)

PS. Are U a boy or a girl? I am a girl. 


on Apr. 16 2011 at 5:19 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

have no idea waht the &quot thingy is :$


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