Happy?

March 25, 2011
By faerietalesdie SILVER, Riverside, California
faerietalesdie SILVER, Riverside, California
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“Happy?”

I glanced at the gold diamond faceted ring.

He waited for an answer, but it never came. After awhile the silence grew too heavy.

“I love you,” he whispered, then left.

Was he just going to ignore that the ring wasn’t on my finger? That I hadn’t said yes?

The author's comments:
I wrote this fifty word story (if it can even be called a story) for a creative writing class I attended over the summer of 2009. It was made to be put in a mini zine. The 'story' goes a lot better with the zine and its illustrations.

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on Apr. 2 2011 at 2:48 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

I wrote a six-word story for the course I took. I like 50 words better :P

on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:58 pm
LovelyMiss GOLD, Floresville, Texas
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Oh wow that was amazing!:) it was shirt simple straight to the point. I really loves the girl character!:D great amazing job!


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