For him...

March 16, 2011
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He liked Girls that dressed in skirts and t-shirts
so i dressed in skirts and t-shirts,
He liked girls that had make-up on, so i put make-up on,
He liked Girls that were skinny, so i exercised til i was very skinny,
He liked every girl except for me,
so i didn't wear skirts and t-shirt's, and i didn't put on ANY make-up, and i didn't worry about my weight at all.
Then he finally noticed me and i forgot about him.

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831onelove said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 3:58 pm
Lol thanks.
NickyJ said...
Mar. 3, 2012 at 3:10 pm
I can not relate to this at all because I'm a guy and I've never wanted a relationship before. I've never "noticed" a girl because i simply wasn't interested. Whether or not one wanted to be noticed by me is outside my realm of comprehension because I"m just oblivious to those things. XD

But, a decent poem all the same.
LoveeHurtss said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 7:12 am
I always tried to be the girl my man wanted me to be and when he never noticed i gave up and then he wanted me when i'd already moved on.Really great stuff, short and simple but meaningful and genuine. (:
poemgirl. replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 8:46 am
thanks, i know how this feels i've been something im not for a guy before and its just stupid because u forget ur self on the way...
weirdone said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 8:50 pm
I think that this poem has so much meaning.we try to be like someone else or someone else. then when we dont get the attention we want, we forget. when they finally notice us, we dont  give a crap anymore. thanks for proving to us what really goes on in our lives in so few sentences.
musicloveswritting16 said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 4:29 pm
That's the way to be. please read mine when they're up!
Shaded114 said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 9:52 am
Really good
poemgirl. replied...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 2:03 pm
thanks :D 
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