Crush Rush

January 21, 2011
By Animefairy GOLD, Deep River, Connecticut
Animefairy GOLD, Deep River, Connecticut
18 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can design and create, and build the most wonderful place in the world. But it takes people to make the dream a reality." -Walt Disney


I stare down the hallway as the sunlight brightens the surrounding tan lockers and the neutral tan title glistens. I see him, and my heart starts pounding
The beating of my heart, blocks out the obnoxious laughter. I can hardly hear the flow of water running to the water fountain. I ignore the clinking of opening and shutting lockers. The sound of footsteps of traveling people fades away. Time has stopped.
My brown eyes shine in the radiance of the sunlight, now caramel, same color as his short cut hair. I examine his narrow small nose and memorize the placement of a few freckles on his face.
I start to walk slowly to him as if in slow motion. Time seemed to be slow, but I was aware. Out of a daydream, I find myself next to him. I see him, and my heart pounds. He looks in to my eyes. I see my reflection as I deeply gaze into his.
“Hi,” he said.
I start to slowly breathe, “Hi.”


The author's comments:
Crush Rush is a microfiction I had to write for Creative Writing class.

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on Jan. 25 2011 at 6:29 pm
Animefairy GOLD, Deep River, Connecticut
18 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can design and create, and build the most wonderful place in the world. But it takes people to make the dream a reality." -Walt Disney

Thank You! I've been thinking of writing a second, but I thought it would be dum. Great Suggestion.

on Jan. 25 2011 at 12:45 pm
Ultim@te SILVER, Sisters, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments
Pretty good:) maybe you could do another one but from his point of view, or someone else who also likes him and sees the couple get closer, idk, I liked it!

AshRyan BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 8:25 pm
AshRyan BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.

Nice job (:

AnnieHay said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 6:14 pm
AnnieHay, Glendale, New York
0 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.~Ferris Beuller
The past is the future with the lights on.~Plus 44

i like it! quite adorable:)

on Jan. 23 2011 at 8:32 am
Animefairy GOLD, Deep River, Connecticut
18 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can design and create, and build the most wonderful place in the world. But it takes people to make the dream a reality." -Walt Disney

THANK YOU ! <3

songsrun said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 5:21 am
awe! its cute, i like it!


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