Their Love Story, 1

January 17, 2011
By CjLinds BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
CjLinds BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Dont cry because it's over, smile because it happened." - Dr. Suess


-story starts at a party of emo/scene people, they are all playing seven minutes in heaven-

Carter-*Has healthy dirty blonde down to her shoulders, layered, with gorgeous teal eyes and fair skin, a subtle nose piercing and a cute face,sits next to her best friend, Nikko* Nikko?
Nikko-*Is tall and muscular, naturally tanned skin, very deep hazel eyes with spiky dark brown hair where it looks almost black, with an emo hair styper,looks over at he* hm?
Carter-Remind me again why I’m here? *smirks*
Nikko-cause, you need to learn to be alone w/ Alex if he’s going to ask you out
Carter-blah!
Nikko-*smirks, putting a Sharpie into the hat*
Alex-*smiles, putting Nick’s guitar pick in the hat*
Carter-*gets hat, pulls out a Sharpie*
Nikko-*stands up, leads her into the closet*
Carter- I thought…
Nikko-Yeah, huh, us too! I thought you’d pick the guitar pick
Carter-But, I didn’t *sits there with her side bands and lip ring*
Nikko-We don’t have to do anything anyways
Carter-*kisses Nikko on the cheek*
Nikko-*stares at her, leans in, they lightly kiss*
-someone yells it’s time-
Carter-*eases out of it, walks out of the closet*
Nikko-*follows her out*
Alex-*gets up, goes over to Nikko as some girl picks the guitar pick* Dude..you said…
Nikko –I know.
Alex-Then why wasn’t I! in there with her?!
Nikko-I don’t know Rex! I think she’s confused right now
Alex-Confused? About us?
Nikko-I dunno, maybe, I gotta take her home, Come on.
Alex-*goes to grab his hoodie.*
Carter-*lays across the hood of Nikko’s car, looking at the stars*
Nikko-*lays down with her* Whatcha thinking about?
Carter-*turns on her side to face him* Nikko, has it ever occurred to you that maybe I don’t want to be w. Alex?
Nikko-*looks at her with concern*
Carter-Well… Alex is a good friend, but…
Nikko-What do you want to tell Alex then?
Carter-Well, whatever I end up telling him, ugh, I don’t even know
Nikko-*smirks, hugs her*
Alex-*walks over to Nikko, pulls him off the hood of the car onto the ground, kicks in repeatedly in the stomach*
Carter-*leaps off the car* Alex! Stop!
A.N. Shall I continue? :)



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on Jan. 26 2011 at 11:01 pm
Livvyluv203 SILVER, St. Clair Shore, Michigan
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I like this a lot :) 

the format is a little confusing at first and it's not what I'm used to but i still like it :)

You did a great job and please continue :D


nikkie39 said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:11 am
this story of romance its alrie but um when r u goieng to make it more interesting

on Jan. 19 2011 at 6:46 am
carilloony GOLD, Sterling, Virginia
12 articles 2 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love another person is to see the face of God."

Okay! Thanks that's great!

CjLinds BRONZE said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 10:10 pm
CjLinds BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dont cry because it's over, smile because it happened." - Dr. Suess

Yeah I love this format,figured I'd share it with others :) thanks a bunch for the feed back! :) 2nd part will be posted soon!

on Jan. 18 2011 at 3:23 pm
carilloony GOLD, Sterling, Virginia
12 articles 2 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love another person is to see the face of God."

Wow, at first I thought I wouldn't like that format but it's actually really good! Please write more, I'll definitely read it! :)

CjLinds BRONZE said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 2:11 pm
CjLinds BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dont cry because it's over, smile because it happened." - Dr. Suess

Thanks so much :) I plan on explaining everything into better detail in my second entry! :)

AnnieHay said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 12:42 pm
AnnieHay, Glendale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.~Ferris Beuller
The past is the future with the lights on.~Plus 44

i really like the format you decided to do, it just gets a little confusing..but good job, i rly like it:)


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