What are you doing here?

December 10, 2010
By Sessai GOLD, Hollister, Florida
Sessai GOLD, Hollister, Florida
14 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I dislike hypocrites. Especially when they are hypocritical against hypocrites.~
Walking with demons is be easier than walking with angels~


“What are you doing here?”
“I came to see you.”
“You really shouldn’t.”
“I know.”
“Why did you?”
“I couldn’t help it.”
They stared at each other.
“You heard what he said earlier.”
“Yes.”
“Did you listen to anything he said? Did you not comprehend any of that?”
She winced at his harsh words. “I did.” She said softly, “I know what it means.”
He was silent for a long time.
“But you’re still here.” He whispered. He was staring at her like he didn’t want to believe it.
“This isn’t another scam to try to break right?” He tried to state his question flatly, but she could hear the hope in his voice.
“I’m still here.”
“So am I.” he said. She smiled.


The author's comments:
Ok. I wrote this when I was ten right? So don't be to harsh. I thought is was good at the time :P

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on Dec. 15 2010 at 5:09 pm
ShannonVictoria BRONZE, Dutch Haror, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Love takes time. Don't keep asking random people to go out with you. If you wait, God will send the right person to you. But if you don't, then you may never find the one you're destend to be with." -Shannon McConnell

So cute! :) That sounds really good for a ten-year old. :)

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on Dec. 14 2010 at 3:46 pm
Sessai GOLD, Hollister, Florida
14 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I dislike hypocrites. Especially when they are hypocritical against hypocrites.~
Walking with demons is be easier than walking with angels~

thank you very much!

on Dec. 14 2010 at 1:51 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

10? wow, that was good!


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