Love at First Sight

November 27, 2010
By lagelica lloyd BRONZE, Beaufort, North Carolina
lagelica lloyd BRONZE, Beaufort, North Carolina
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She had flawless pale white skin. Her hair is a ghostly blonde and hangs past her buttocks. Her eyes were like the color of a clear blue sky. She glides beautifully through the hallway as if she had no care in the world. Her swift movements send a gentle zephyr through her hair. The enticing scent of her sweet pea shampoo seeps into my nostrils. As I walk past her our eyes meet. Though only seconds passed it feels as if we stared into each other’s eyes for a lifetime. A rush of unknown feelings flustered in my chest. As we proceed pass each other I realized that someone once told me they had feelings just as I feel now. It was the feeling of love at first sight.

The author's comments:
This will hopefully be a passage in my soon coming romance novel. Tell me what you think about it and what i might need to do to make it better. Please give truthful reviews and do not spare any feelings. Enjoy. :)

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