One Last Kiss

July 5, 2010
By ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o


I heave a contented sigh as I watch the characters on the screen doing something but not paying enough attention to know what. He puts his arm around and I breathe him in. I lean my head on his shoulder and close my eyes, wishing this moment could never end. I smile up at him and to my surprise and intense delight, he tenderly cups my chin in his hand and kisses me.


“I love you,” I whisper.


“I love you more,” he whispers back


Now it is my turn to kiss him, and I do, with a fierce passion.

***********


I wake up to the annoying beeping of my iHome alarm clock and sigh. It was only a dream, of course. But still I hit the snooze button with the hope of getting one last kiss burning in my heart.



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on Sep. 30 2010 at 5:17 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

:) thank you!

on Sep. 30 2010 at 5:17 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

I love this, it's so sweet and mainly, it's realistic. I like this alot!(:

on Sep. 14 2010 at 6:57 pm
ultrabookworm BRONZE, Equestria, Kentucky
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 That was really cute. It was relatable, realistic, and captured the images well. Anyway, great style, drew the reader in.  A++.

on Aug. 3 2010 at 12:59 pm
KourtneyBriann BRONZE, Niles, Michigan
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Couldn't say it better myself. Short, seet, an simple. Plzzzzz give me feedback on my work. I really appreciate it.

HLFelix GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 5:19 pm
HLFelix GOLD, Teaneck, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"So do all who live to see such times, but that is not for them to decide. All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - J.R.R. Tolkien

Short, sweet, simple, and relatable. Nice job. Nice picture choice as well. 

samhns BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 11:58 pm
samhns BRONZE, Lathrop, California
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is everyone is going to hurt you. You just gotta find the ones worth suffering for. - bob marley

ahhh ive had that dream. multiple times actually about the same guy from my life or my dream guy.

on Jul. 24 2010 at 11:39 pm
Eatfoodzap SILVER, Winchester, Massachusetts
5 articles 2 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. But if you can overcome the sacrifice and make it your own, you will gain an irreplaceable Fullmetal heart."- Edward Elric

This is really pretty. Short, sweet, and to the point. Especially with the last line, you really her her feeling of longing. ;D

on Jul. 24 2010 at 5:57 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

hmmm. i'll work on it. thanks :)

on Jul. 24 2010 at 12:45 pm
CloudWanderer BRONZE, Wheelersburg, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We don't stop playing because we get old, we get old because we stop playing."

"Never lie, steal, cheat, or drink. But if you must lie, lie in the arms of your true love. If you must steal, steal from bad company. If you must cheat, cheat death. If you must drink, drink in the moments that take your breath away."

Ummm maybe have her actually meet this guy in real life. Like, at school or at her job or something. Unless she doesnt actually have a specific guy in mind and he's faceless. That could be interesting, meeting a boy that reminds her of this dream... *shrug*

on Jul. 24 2010 at 10:38 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

aww. thanks, PCO916!

PC0916 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:50 am
PC0916 BRONZE, Neskowin, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Women are brain ninjas!" -Dane Cook

I think it was great. Reminds me of my first kiss as well.  

on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:32 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

thanks, CloudWanderer! any suggestions?

on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:56 am
Stormythrone BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
4 articles 19 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is good or bad. Its thinking that makes it so. -Benjamin Franklin

The dream reminds me of my first kiss. hmm, food for thought. Anyways, keep writing!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 9:10 pm
CloudWanderer BRONZE, Wheelersburg, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We don't stop playing because we get old, we get old because we stop playing."

"Never lie, steal, cheat, or drink. But if you must lie, lie in the arms of your true love. If you must steal, steal from bad company. If you must cheat, cheat death. If you must drink, drink in the moments that take your breath away."

Umm it's a very good start. Pretty short, but that's cool. Add more to it, and it'll be great!


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