One Last Kiss

July 5, 2010
I heave a contented sigh as I watch the characters on the screen doing something but not paying enough attention to know what. He puts his arm around and I breathe him in. I lean my head on his shoulder and close my eyes, wishing this moment could never end. I smile up at him and to my surprise and intense delight, he tenderly cups my chin in his hand and kisses me.

“I love you,” I whisper.

“I love you more,” he whispers back

Now it is my turn to kiss him, and I do, with a fierce passion.


I wake up to the annoying beeping of my iHome alarm clock and sigh. It was only a dream, of course. But still I hit the snooze button with the hope of getting one last kiss burning in my heart.

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SilverLuna said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 5:17 pm
I love this, it's so sweet and mainly, it's realistic. I like this alot!(:
ThatClarinetPerson replied...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 5:17 pm
:) thank you!
ultrabookworm said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 6:57 pm
 That was really cute. It was relatable, realistic, and captured the images well. Anyway, great style, drew the reader in.  A++.
DeadPeopleKinndaGrl said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 12:59 pm
Couldn't say it better myself. Short, seet, an simple. Plzzzzz give me feedback on my work. I really appreciate it.
HLFelix said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 5:19 pm
Short, sweet, simple, and relatable. Nice job. Nice picture choice as well. 
hushedlove said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 11:58 pm
ahhh ive had that dream. multiple times actually about the same guy from my life or my dream guy.
Eatfoodzap said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 11:39 pm
This is really pretty. Short, sweet, and to the point. Especially with the last line, you really her her feeling of longing. ;D
PC0916 said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 1:50 am
I think it was great. Reminds me of my first kiss as well.  
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 10:38 am
aww. thanks, PCO916!
Stormythrone said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 3:56 am
The dream reminds me of my first kiss. hmm, food for thought. Anyways, keep writing!
CloudWanderer said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 9:10 pm
Umm it's a very good start. Pretty short, but that's cool. Add more to it, and it'll be great!
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 3:32 pm
thanks, CloudWanderer! any suggestions?
CloudWanderer replied...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 12:45 pm
Ummm maybe have her actually meet this guy in real life. Like, at school or at her job or something. Unless she doesnt actually have a specific guy in mind and he's faceless. That could be interesting, meeting a boy that reminds her of this dream... *shrug*
Lanier42 replied...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 5:57 pm
hmmm. i'll work on it. thanks :)
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