Reality Check.. You Pt6

July 1, 2010
By LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
12 articles 4 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost

I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.
-Kurt Cobain


You are everywhere. Fair enough that you’re in my classes. But dude, my locker, seriously? I use extreme graphic terms that basically tell you to get lost. I wonder are you always this forward, this demanding. I greatly underestimated your self confidence. That smile on your face, the one I found attractive in the past, falters. But only for a second. You push a strand of hair from my face. Automatically, I slap your hand away. A voice behind me tells you to get lost. Its Dave. I let out a mental sigh of relief. I know you were just flirting, but honestly, you’re kind of creeping me out. You shoot daggers at Dave. I wonder why you don’t take a swing at him. I mean, not that I think that highly of myself or anything but usually you wouldn’t hesitate beating a guy up. Suddenly, I realise that Dave, is well, buff. I mean he is way taller than you and has definitely got the jock body, even though I don’t think he’s ever played sport. Hah. He intimidates you doesn’t he? I smile. You slink away. I turn to Dave and jump to give him a massive bear hug. He smiles and kisses my forehead. Which, is weird but nice. Not that I like him in that way. I can’t. Can I?


The author's comments:
stalker much? :L
how's it going so far??

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on Aug. 17 2011 at 7:00 am
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

Oh please make more! I am dying waiting!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 5:57 pm
LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
12 articles 4 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost

I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.
-Kurt Cobain

awh thank you. i'm going to try take a stab at continuing it anyway. suggestions? :)

thanks. you too :) x


on Jul. 28 2010 at 5:56 pm
LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
12 articles 4 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost

I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.
-Kurt Cobain

yeah i know what you mean. it had started off as a letter kind of think to 'unnamed jerk' but its turning into a story now. i might repost it as a story and put more detail in the description. we'll see anyway.

thanks for the comment :) x


on Jul. 28 2010 at 5:55 pm
LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
12 articles 4 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost

I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.
-Kurt Cobain

awh thank you so much. that means a lot.

i'm not too sure. i don't know where to go with the story next. i'm thinking of making the 'unnamed jerk' do something really bad, but i'm not to sure how to go about it. any suggestions are appreciated :)

thanks by the way :) x


on Jul. 28 2010 at 5:54 pm
LiveLife2theMax GOLD, Wicklow, Other
12 articles 4 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
-Robert Frost

I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.
-Kurt Cobain

awh thank you so much. that means a lot.

i'm not too sure. i don't know where to go with the story next. i'm thinking of making the 'unnamed jerk' do something really bad, but i'm not to sure how to go about it. any suggestions are appreciated :)

thanks by the way :) x


on Jul. 20 2010 at 4:41 pm
TheReader SILVER, Avon, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Go for whatever you want, even if your friends aren't backing you up. "

Love this. Are you making more? I wish you would I love this story. let me know an good work.

on Jul. 18 2010 at 2:39 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
35 articles 0 photos 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

it's a really good story, but I feel like you should show more of what's going on. Use light, the five senses. Put us in the story. It feels a little distant right now. But is a really good start I can't wait to read more :D

on Jul. 17 2010 at 5:51 pm
Gabriela_Ayala BRONZE, Houston, Texas
1 article 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't worry about the people in your past. There's a reason they didn't make it into your future.

I love it :) seriously i like it keep it up :) have a blessed day




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