Stranger

June 9, 2010
By kayjeanette BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
kayjeanette BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Dear Stranger,

Who are you? You may know me, but clearly I don’t know you. You lerk inside the house and everywhere I see you. It’s like I see your face, know who you are physically, but mentally, emotionally? I don’t know what that is. I always wish you would say hello, but you’d rather go on and leave me alone. Are you scared? Weak? Nervous to a point where you can’t speak? Maybe I am the stranger. Maybe you see me as the stranger. Maybe we are worlds apart. I have yet to know. I wish that all of this could be taken away, so we can finally see each other eye to eye, page to page. I can see you want to, but you have the will to keep it away. Stranger, are you aware what you do to me? Do you know that everytime I see your face, it sends chills all through my body, in my veins? Is it wrong to invision your eyes staring into mine? Stranger, tell me all your thoughts, good or bad. I will be here to listen when you want to talk.

Your stalkee,
Kayla


The author's comments:
this originally was a blog i posted via tumblr, for a 30 day letter writing challenge. i liked it so much, that i decided it'd be cool to post it on here.

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on Jul. 12 2010 at 12:33 am
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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I agree,(:

on Jul. 9 2010 at 1:14 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

overall i liked it. but one thing confused me. "your stalkee." do you mean that the stranger was stalking her or that she was stalking the stranger?

on Jul. 7 2010 at 1:22 am
Conno_Rumsted PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You understand...It is too far. I cannot take this body along with me. It is too heavy. Left behind, it will only be an old cast-off shell. There is nothing sad about an old shell"

wow! you gave me chills! this was truly a work of art. i enjoyed reading it! thank you! :)

on Jul. 6 2010 at 6:39 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I loved this, so unique and well-written, and a very interesting subject.  Excellent job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?


on Jul. 6 2010 at 2:20 pm
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

What a great subject. Gosh I love stalking. Keep it up!

Sliva23 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:30 am
Sliva23 BRONZE, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Love to faults is always blind, always is to joy inclined. Lawless, winged, and unconfined, and breaks all chains from every mind.

I really and truly love this.....its soo different and unique
keep writing :)


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