the roses

June 22, 2010
By my-own-life BRONZE, West Milwaukee, Wisconsin
my-own-life BRONZE, West Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
if we are so free why cant my reality be the same as my dream


we see the roses grow in our yard bigger and bigger they get and together we help and we know that it is our love that grows to but then that day came i saw them bury you after that accident and a pile of our roses rested on your coffin and now the yard looks so bare and i cant help but to stare my bed is empty my heart is gone i loved you till the end and i still belive till death to us part


The author's comments:
this was made after i read a story about a couple that were gardeners and the family was shattered when a car accident killed the wife and the man continued to grow roses for his wife

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on Jul. 1 2010 at 10:15 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

No problem, and thank you:)

on Jul. 1 2010 at 10:09 pm
my-own-life BRONZE, West Milwaukee, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
if we are so free why cant my reality be the same as my dream

thanks for the advice and sure

on Jun. 30 2010 at 4:47 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Aww, this was really sweet.  You wrote it very well, just try to put in periods and commas.  Great job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?



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