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we see the roses grow in our yard bigger and bigger they get and together we help and we know that it is our love that grows to but then that day came i saw them bury you after that accident and a pile of our roses rested on your coffin and now the yard looks so bare and i cant help but to stare my bed is empty my heart is gone i loved you till the end and i still belive till death to us part





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gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 4:47 pm

Aww, this was really sweet.  You wrote it very well, just try to put in periods and commas.  Great job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?

 
my-own-life replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 10:09 pm
thanks for the advice and sure
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 10:15 pm
No problem, and thank you:)
 
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