I cheated

June 10, 2010
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As he stared at me through his unconditional eyes, he judged, taunted, and disaproved me like a strayless cat. I wanted to disappear from it all be invisible for a day but i wasn't... Throwing my hands out i pleaded like a homeless animal scearching for a place to live... But he turned his head in discus, and held his heart in horror. The treacherous, agonizing pain that overcame him i could do nothing... Falling to the floor i sombered in sorryness so overwhelemd that there was nothing else to do in this world but weep.. I cheated...

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Lollipop said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 2:32 pm
this was good. Sadly i can relate but thats probably why i like it. :)
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 9:35 pm

Interesting, pretty short, but very emotional.  You can totally understand what the girl is feeling.  Good work!  Just watch your grammar.

Btw, anyone who sees this, will you check out and comment on my work?

Diana101 said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 3:32 pm
Kinda short, bit I liked it:)
Diana101 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 3:33 pm
Opps! I spelled 'but' wrong, sorry again:)
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