I cheated

June 10, 2010
By Lester_34 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
Lester_34 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Keep your head held high becuz ppl wuld kill to c u fall


As he stared at me through his unconditional eyes, he judged, taunted, and disaproved me like a strayless cat. I wanted to disappear from it all be invisible for a day but i wasn't... Throwing my hands out i pleaded like a homeless animal scearching for a place to live... But he turned his head in discus, and held his heart in horror. The treacherous, agonizing pain that overcame him i could do nothing... Falling to the floor i sombered in sorryness so overwhelemd that there was nothing else to do in this world but weep.. I cheated...



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on Aug. 19 2010 at 2:32 pm
Lollipop2012 SILVER, Las Veags, Nevada
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this was good. Sadly i can relate but thats probably why i like it. :)

on Jun. 14 2010 at 9:35 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Interesting, pretty short, but very emotional.  You can totally understand what the girl is feeling.  Good work!  Just watch your grammar.

Btw, anyone who sees this, will you check out and comment on my work?


Diana101 GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 3:33 pm
Diana101 GOLD, Grove City, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"God's delays are not God's denials"

Opps! I spelled 'but' wrong, sorry again:)

Diana101 GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 3:32 pm
Diana101 GOLD, Grove City, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God's delays are not God's denials"

Kinda short, bit I liked it:)


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